RE: Scope edits

I agree with your points Jutta (especially the first one!) To emphasize the
Universal bit, how about:

"more accessible to all potential Web content users and authors, including
people with disabilities."

It seems to me that "especially" is emphasize or focus. Including seems more
natural - sort of "of course".

Or am I way off or overreacting?

regards, Karen Mardahl

>-----Original Message-----
>From: w3c-wai-au-request@w3.org 
>[mailto:w3c-wai-au-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Jutta Treviranus
>Sent: 19. november 2004 18:44
>To: w3c-wai-au@w3.org
>Subject: Scope edits
>Importance: High
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>In the scope statement we presently have the phrase:
>"more accessible and usable to  people with a full range of 
>disabilities."
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>This seems to imply that the people have a full set of disabilities 
>which is not what we intend.
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>We also want to stress the Universal Design aspect of what we are 
>doing. I propose rewording this as follows:
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>"more accessible to all potential Web content users and authors, 
>especially people with disabilities."
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>Any objections or further suggestions?
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>Jutta
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