In 2.3 "author" and "they" aren't the same *number* which makes "expend" have to reflect singular and plural, which it cannot. In 2.5 "...may create inaccessible..." WHY? In 2.6 "including" is a participle whereas other techniques start with a verb. A typo in 2. "circulation" should be "circulate on". "Provide an author...selecting..." should be "electing". In 3.3 the phrase "By incorporating..." is a dangling participle. In 3.4.1 "Ensure that..." is not a sentence. Picky, picky, picky. -- Love. ACCESSIBILITY IS RIGHT - NOT PRIVILEGE http://dicomp.pair.comReceived on Thursday, 18 February 1999 17:22:16 GMT
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