Re: editorial corrections to Primer PR

This diff accurately captures the intended changes.

--Frank

Brian McBride wrote:

> 
> For convenience I have created an html diff between the PR version and 
> the ed's draft which can be found at:
> 
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-archive/2004Jan/0040.html
> 
> Brian
> 
> 
> Frank Manola wrote:
> 
>>
>> The corrected version of the Primer PR is now available off the 
>> "editor's draft" link on the WG home page.  All I've done is make the 
>> set of changes I noted in my earlier message (less the change in 
>> Section 3.3 I decided was unnecessary after reading Graham's 
>> comments);  I didn't add bullets for these changes to the Changes 
>> Appendix, change the title to an Editor's Draft, etc.
>>
>> Also please note that there are two files involved:  the main .html 
>> file, and a new file vehicleClassesJan12.png representing the updated 
>> figure (the old file was fig17dec16.png).
>>
>> --Frank
>>
> 
> 

Received on Wednesday, 14 January 2004 13:28:48 UTC