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Re: New Charmod 2003-08-22

From: Jeremy Carroll <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
Date: Tue, 02 Sep 2003 16:09:50 +0100
Message-ID: <3F54B2BE.9030107@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
To: Dan Brickley <danbri@w3.org>
Cc: Dave Beckett <dave.beckett@bristol.ac.uk>, w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org


Sorry, I had missed that you had already sent a satisfactory draft for SOTD.

I've reread and commented on the (section of the) process document.

Your suggeted text
[[
This Working Draft consolidates changes and editorial improvements
	undertaken in response to feedback received during the Last Call
	publication of the RDFCore specifications which began on 23 January
	2003.

]]

is more elegant (IMHO) than the text you copied out below.

Let's pretend I hadn't spoken!

Jeremy




Dan Brickley wrote:

> The difference between the txt below and 
> http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/RDFCore/TR/templates/sept-wd-sotd.html is 
> that they're anticipating a CR as their next phase, whereas LC2 looks
> more likely for us. I don't feel the need to nail that one down at this 
> stage though...
> 
> There are a few phrases might be worth borrowing though.
> 
> [[
> This
> 
>>> interim publication is used to document the progress made on
>>> addressing the comments received during the second Last Call, as
>>> well as other modifications resulting from continuing collaboration
>>> with other working groups.
>>>
> ]]
> 
> Perhaps dropping 'interim' since we don't name our next stage?
> 
> Dan
> 
> * Jeremy Carroll <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com> [2003-09-02 15:31+0100]
> 
>>
>>They got very close to CR a month or two ago ...
>>
>>I would certainly prefer this sort of wording in our SOTD for the 5th Sept 
>>publication.
>>
>>I guess that is Eric's call, as advised by the chairs.
>>
>>Jeremy
>>
>>
>>Dave Beckett wrote:
>>
>>
>>>Character Model for the World Wide Web 1.0
>>>W3C Working Draft 22 August 2003
>>>
>>>http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-charmod-20030822/
>>>
>>>First one since April 2002.  Interesting wording:
>>>
>>> [[This is a W3C Working Draft published between the second Last
>>> Call on 30 April 2002 and a planned Candidate Recommendation. This
>>> interim publication is used to document the progress made on
>>> addressing the comments received during the second Last Call, as
>>> well as other modifications resulting from continuing collaboration
>>> with other working groups. A list of last call comments with their
>>> status can be found in the disposition of comments (public version,
>>> Members only version).
>>>
>>> Work is still ongoing on addressing the comments received during
>>> the second Last Call. We do not encourage comments on this Working
>>> Draft; instead we ask reviewers to wait for being informed about
>>> our disposition of their comments, or for Canditate Recommendation
>>> in case of new comments. ...  ]]
>>>
>>>maybe we could have something similar?
>>>
>>>The changes aren't entirely clear since they are in a member only web
>>>page that could be updated at any time compared to the above.
>>>
>>>Dave
>>>
>>>
>>>
> 
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