- From: Jeremy Carroll <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
- Date: Tue, 02 Sep 2003 16:09:50 +0100
- To: Dan Brickley <danbri@w3.org>
- Cc: Dave Beckett <dave.beckett@bristol.ac.uk>, w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org
Sorry, I had missed that you had already sent a satisfactory draft for SOTD. I've reread and commented on the (section of the) process document. Your suggeted text [[ This Working Draft consolidates changes and editorial improvements undertaken in response to feedback received during the Last Call publication of the RDFCore specifications which began on 23 January 2003. ]] is more elegant (IMHO) than the text you copied out below. Let's pretend I hadn't spoken! Jeremy Dan Brickley wrote: > The difference between the txt below and > http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/RDFCore/TR/templates/sept-wd-sotd.html is > that they're anticipating a CR as their next phase, whereas LC2 looks > more likely for us. I don't feel the need to nail that one down at this > stage though... > > There are a few phrases might be worth borrowing though. > > [[ > This > >>> interim publication is used to document the progress made on >>> addressing the comments received during the second Last Call, as >>> well as other modifications resulting from continuing collaboration >>> with other working groups. >>> > ]] > > Perhaps dropping 'interim' since we don't name our next stage? > > Dan > > * Jeremy Carroll <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com> [2003-09-02 15:31+0100] > >> >>They got very close to CR a month or two ago ... >> >>I would certainly prefer this sort of wording in our SOTD for the 5th Sept >>publication. >> >>I guess that is Eric's call, as advised by the chairs. >> >>Jeremy >> >> >>Dave Beckett wrote: >> >> >>>Character Model for the World Wide Web 1.0 >>>W3C Working Draft 22 August 2003 >>> >>>http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-charmod-20030822/ >>> >>>First one since April 2002. Interesting wording: >>> >>> [[This is a W3C Working Draft published between the second Last >>> Call on 30 April 2002 and a planned Candidate Recommendation. This >>> interim publication is used to document the progress made on >>> addressing the comments received during the second Last Call, as >>> well as other modifications resulting from continuing collaboration >>> with other working groups. A list of last call comments with their >>> status can be found in the disposition of comments (public version, >>> Members only version). >>> >>> Work is still ongoing on addressing the comments received during >>> the second Last Call. We do not encourage comments on this Working >>> Draft; instead we ask reviewers to wait for being informed about >>> our disposition of their comments, or for Canditate Recommendation >>> in case of new comments. ... ]] >>> >>>maybe we could have something similar? >>> >>>The changes aren't entirely clear since they are in a member only web >>>page that could be updated at any time compared to the above. >>> >>>Dave >>> >>> >>> >
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