Fwd: 13 Aug Arch Doc available for review

Any volunteers to check this over from an RDF perspective?

Brian



>Resent-Date: Tue, 13 Aug 2002 16:33:25 -0400 (EDT)
>Date: Tue, 13 Aug 2002 16:29:31 -0400
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>Hello www-tag,
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>The TAG invites your comments on the latest draft
>of the Architecture Document [1]. The TAG expects
>to publish a first public Working Draft (on the
>TR page) of the Architecture Document in a few weeks
>and would like material feedback on the current draft.
>
>The TAG does not commit to responding to every comment;
>this is not a formal call for review. The usual TAG
>policy [2] regarding email on this list is in effect.
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>Please be concrete in your comments. Propose alternative
>language. Avoid sustaining long threads.
>
>Chapter 1 ("Identifiers and Resources") may deserve the
>most attention -- it has received a lot more attention
>from the TAG than the other chatpers. On the other hand,
>concrete suggestions for how to structure the other
>chapters could also help us improve the first public
>draft.
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>Thank you,
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>   - Ian
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>[1] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2002/0813-archdoc
>[2] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/#tag-attn
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