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Re: More editorial fixes, was: Editorial fix: uppercasing "Section" in section references

From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
Date: Fri, 28 Apr 2006 19:55:57 +0200
Message-ID: <4452572D.50800@gmx.de>
To: WebDav WG <w3c-dist-auth@w3.org>
Hi,

here are some more fixes (one typo, plus the resolution for BugZilla 
issue 221 (<http://ietf.cse.ucsc.edu:8080/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=221>).

Best regards, Julian


Index: draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/xml2rfc/draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.43
diff -u -r1.43 draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml
--- draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml	28 Apr 2006 16:08:57 -0000	1.43
+++ draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml	28 Apr 2006 17:54:34 -0000
@@ -4463,7 +4463,7 @@
       <t hangText="Name: ">lockroot </t>
       <t hangText="Purpose: ">Contains the root URL of the lock, which is the URL through
             which the resource was addressed in the LOCK request. </t>
-      <t hangText="Description: ">he href element contains the root of the lock.
+      <t hangText="Description: ">The href element contains the root of the lock.
             The server SHOULD include this in all 
             DAV:lockdiscovery property values and the response to LOCK 
             requests. </t>
@@ -5308,7 +5308,8 @@
             <t hangText="Name:">cannot-modify-protected-property</t>
             <t hangText="Use with:">403 Forbidden</t>
             <t hangText="Purpose:">(precondition) -- The client attempted to set
-                a read-only property in a PROPPATCH (such as DAV:getetag).
+                a protected property in a PROPPATCH (such as DAV:getetag).  See
+                also <xref target="RFC3253"/>, Section 3.12.
             </t>
       </list></t>
         
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