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xmldsig-core: Updated editor's draft

From: Thomas Roessler <tlr@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 22 May 2007 16:57:18 +0200
To: public-xmlsec-maintwg@w3.org
Message-ID: <20070522145718.GA5298@raktajino.does-not-exist.org>

There's an updated editor's draft at [1], 
$Date: 2007/05/22 14:56:36 $.

Changes against the previous version:

- Sean's proposed text for E05 is taken into account in section
  4.3.3.1, as resolved on the call.  That takes care of E05.

- The note in 4.3.3.2 had its grammar fix applied, as noted during
  the call ("reliance of" -> "reliance upon").

- In 4.4.3, I changed the formatting, so the attribute is now also
  visible in the changes-only version of the draft (ACTION-33).

- In 6.5, I have moved the Note that addresses E02 above section
  6.5.1, as agreed during the call.

- "canonicalizatoin" was changed to "canonicalization", also in 6.5

I also propose, as an editorial change, to strike the word "two"
from "The two algorithms below" in section 6.5, since the
specification now includes four algorithms.  I've put that change
into the editor's draft.

Outstanding items:

- Juan Carlos' further clarification for 3.1.1 (but I see he has
  just posted a proposal; ACTION-31)

- Sean's word-smithing on "generator" and "validator"

- E01 (dependent, among other things, upon Konrad's completion of
  ACTION-19)

1. http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmldsig-core/
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Thomas Roessler, W3C  <tlr@w3.org>
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