RE: new draft xml proc profiles doc

Hi all,

Some small things that I found in the latest version:

1. Section 2.3 contains "_C_lass Extended" while everywhere else the text uses "class" with lowercase "c".

2. Regarding the perennial problems with "Entirely, ..." in sections 4.2.2/4.2.3: what about changing it to something like "Differs entirely, ..."? With the current text, I think it is quite difficult to see what "Entirely" actually refers to.

3. Section 4.2.2: The text now uses the phrase: "Entirely, in a way parallel to the Element Information Items case above." I think we know what "parallel" means in this context, but isn't it still too vague? Is using the analogy with the EII case really better than including the precise full text for each information item? The same applies to section 4.2.3.

4. Typo in section 6: existance -> existence

5. Typo in section 7: "not all of the profiles defined about can be combined" about -> above? (But maybe I just don't know the phrase.)

6. URLs in the References section: The link to the latest version of the XProc specification is still wrong: http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/REC-xproc-20100309/. It should be: http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/REC-xproc-20100511/
Well, it is actually more complicated: look at the URL under *xml:id*.

Regards,
Vojtech

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Vojtech Toman
Consultant Software Engineer
EMC | Information Intelligence Group
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: James Fuller [mailto:jim@webcomposite.com]
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> Subject: new draft xml proc profiles doc
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> http://www.w3.org/XML/XProc/docs/xml-proc-profiles.xml
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> DONE integrated Murray rationale
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> DONE CMSMCQ - culled conformance statements
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> DONE all of Vojtech comments have been addressed
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> DONE all of CMSMCQ Comments have been addressed
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> DONE add minor text on recursive xinclude
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> DONE all of Paul Grasso comments have been addressed
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> DONE replaced EII with Element Information Items as discussed as final
> fallback (no word back from Alex)
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> DONE replaced a single — with —
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> DONE in Background 1.1 slight change to text, to reduce overloading of
> the word 'define' e.g.  XML applications are often created
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> still working on;
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> * new version of image
> * expanded glossary
> * matching existing processors task
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> J
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