Re: Uncle! New alternate draft [more comments through the end of section 4]

/ ht@inf.ed.ac.uk (Henry S. Thompson) was heard to say:
| 2.4      This is a _huge_ and complex section and completely derails
|          the momentum of a reader who still hasn't gotten to the basic
|          pipeline syntax.  I think it worked better down in section 5
|          where it used to be. . .

Ok, I've reorganized things. Note, however, that this totally *blows* all
the section numbers from these messages :-(

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

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