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Editorial comments on Last Call Draft

From: Innovimax SARL <innovimax@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 22 Sep 2007 13:43:10 +0200
Message-ID: <546c6c1c0709220443x511937f9xde7e2a8a4d1958c4@mail.gmail.com>
To: "XProc WG" <public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org>

s/declartion/declaration/
s/grammer/grammar/
s/intepret/interpret/
s/origianl/original/
s/resuing/reusing/
s/specifed/specified/
s/specifiy/specify/
s/vlaue/value/

In Top of the page

# Management of iteration counting has changed. The
p:iteration-position function was renamed to p:iteration-count and
p:iteration-size was removed.

s/removed/added/

In 2.3 Primary Inputs and Outputs

Please add the same précaution for "source" and "result" than the
following in 2.5 Parameters
[[
(If the pipeline declares an ordinary input named "parameters", the
implicit primary parameter input port will be named "parameters1". If
that's not available, then "parameters2", etc. until an available name
is found.)
]]

In 3 Syntax Overview

Please add Parameter Input ports to this list
[[
Six kinds of things are named in XProc:

   1. Step types,
   2. Steps,
   3. Input ports,
   4. Output ports,
   5. Options, and
   6. Parameters
]]

In 4.1 p:pipeline

s/his most often occurs when the it has been/his most often occurs
when it has been/

In 4.2 p:for-each
Replace
[[
Each subtree selected by the p:for-each from each of the inputs that
appear on the iteration source is wrapped in a document node and
provided to the subpipeline.
]]
By
[[
Each subtree selected by the p:iteration-source is wrapped in a
document node and provided to the subpipeline.
]]

In 4.2.1 and 4.3.1

Please make the "Note to implementers" in bold or whatever


In 5.1.2.2 The c:parameter-set element
Replace
"It is a dynamic error (err:XD0014) for any unqualified attribute
names to appear on a c:parameter element."
by
"It is a dynamic error (err:XD0014) for any unqualified attribute
names to appear on a c:parameter-set element.

Mohamed
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