Re: XProc Editors Draft 2007-07-19: Section 2.3 Comments

/ Jeni Tennison <jeni@jenitennison.com> was heard to say:
| Just one thing in this section: the final example shows the short and
| expanded form of the same pipeline, but the expanded form *doesn't*
| include the parameter input ports that would also be created
| automatically. For completeness, it might be worth adding the
| parameter input port and giving a forward reference to their
| description.

Good point. Done.

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

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