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Re: Updated language draft: 12 Sep 2006

From: Norman Walsh <Norman.Walsh@Sun.COM>
Date: Fri, 15 Sep 2006 14:51:49 -0400
To: public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org
Message-ID: <87y7sl2cai.fsf@nwalsh.com>
/ Rui Lopes <rlopes@di.fc.ul.pt> was heard to say:
| 1 Introduction
|
| * The last phrase of the first paragraph mentions components
| "Components in the pipeline [...]", but the second paragraph
| introduces the notion of component "Each operation in a pipeline is
| performed by a component [...]". Maybe changing to "Operations in the
| pipeline [...]" will solve this.
...

Thanks, Rui. I think I addressed almost all of your comments. A few
may have slipped by as the current work that Henry and I are doing to
normalize the language has had a small ripple effect in the document.

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

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Norman Walsh
XML Standards Architect
Sun Microsystems, Inc.

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