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Re: Document updated

From: Alessandro Vernet <avernet@orbeon.com>
Date: Wed, 15 Mar 2006 18:35:42 -0800
Message-ID: <4828ceec0603151835x171188c9nea19bcb75b9273c4@mail.gmail.com>
To: public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org

Alex,

We are getting close. I noted a couple of details while going through
the document one more time:

1) Under "Definition: Input Document": s/that an input/that is an
input/. Or we can maybe rephrase this: An XML infoset provided as
input to a XML Pipeline or Step.
2) Under "3 Design Principles", s/The design principles [...] are a
kind of requirement/The design principles [...] are requirements/ (I
suggest to remove the "kind of", plural for requirements).
3) Under "Requirements", I am wondering if it is possible to add a
border to the table. I think that this would make the table easier to
read.

Alex

On 3/15/06, Alex Milowski <alex@milowski.org> wrote:
>
> I've made the following changes:
>
> * Added source attribution to 5.28 and 5.29
> * Updates from last telcon/minutes
> * Fixed DSDL use case
> * Added Henry's use cases
>
> http://www.w3.org/XML/XProc/docs/langreq.html
>
> I'll make another editorial pass tonight to look for
> language issues.
>
>
> --
> --Alex Milowski
>
>
>


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