- From: Henry S. Thompson <ht@inf.ed.ac.uk>
- Date: Mon, 04 Nov 2013 14:50:26 +0000
- To: Paul Grosso <paul@paulgrosso.name>
- Cc: public-xml-core-wg@w3.org
Paul Grosso writes:
> Section 3.5, Change controller now reads "XML Working Core Group"
> instead of "XML Core Working Group.
>
> and:
>
> Section 8.2, Change controller now reads "XML WorkingCore Group"
> (wrong word order and missing space).
Sigh. Fixed silently now in what will be -05.
>>> [Comment on new text]
>>> Section 7. XML Versions, 2nd para, last sentence
>>>
>>> There is a use of the word "may" that is not capitalized.
>> reworded
>
> Yes, but fwiw the new text also has a "may". (I can live
> with it, but I just thought I'd point it out.)
Ah, there _were_ two, now there is only one, but I think I won't
change that one -- as it clearly applies to readers, who aren't
subject to normative constraint :-)
ht
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