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Re: Editing "Issues"

From: Tom Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>
Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2011 11:30:24 -0400
To: Antoine Isaac <aisaac@few.vu.nl>
Cc: public-xg-lld@w3.org
Message-ID: <20110906153024.GC74070@julius>
On Tue, Sep 06, 2011 at 11:11:47AM +0200, Antoine Isaac wrote:
> >>Some library data has restricted usage based on local policies, contracts, and conditions. These restrictions, sometimes unclear and untested, can hinder the release of library data as Open Data. Rights issues vary significantly from country to country, making it difficult to collaborate on Open Data publishing.
> >>]
> >
> >Careful...  The longer text says that because of restrictions "data can have
> >unclear and untested rights issues" and the shortened text says that the
> >_restrictions_themselves_ are "unclear and untested".  What is untested: the
> >issues or the restrictions?  A formulation like: "Data can therefore have
> >unclear and untested rights issues that hinder their release as Open Data."
> >would be closer to my understanding of this point.
> 
> OK!
> http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Draft_issues_page_take2&diff=6216&oldid=6213

That fixes it!

Tom

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Tom Baker <tom@tombaker.org>
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