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Re: Editing "Issues"

From: Antoine Isaac <aisaac@few.vu.nl>
Date: Tue, 06 Sep 2011 11:11:47 +0200
Message-ID: <4E65E3D3.9050906@few.vu.nl>
To: public-xg-lld@w3.org
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>> 3. In "Rights issues" I've made the following paragraph a bit shorter:
>> [
>> Some library data has restricted usage based on local policies, contracts, and conditions and may not therefore be published openly. Library bibliographic data can have unclear and untested rights issues that can hinder their release as Open Data. Rights issues vary significantly from country to country, making it difficult to collaborate on open data publishing.
>> ]
>> ->
>> [
>> Some library data has restricted usage based on local policies, contracts, and conditions. These restrictions, sometimes unclear and untested, can hinder the release of library data as Open Data. Rights issues vary significantly from country to country, making it difficult to collaborate on Open Data publishing.
>> ]
>
> Careful...  The longer text says that because of restrictions "data can have
> unclear and untested rights issues" and the shortened text says that the
> _restrictions_themselves_ are "unclear and untested".  What is untested: the
> issues or the restrictions?  A formulation like: "Data can therefore have
> unclear and untested rights issues that hinder their release as Open Data."
> would be closer to my understanding of this point.

OK!
http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Draft_issues_page_take2&diff=6216&oldid=6213

Antoine
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