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Re: Library data is expressed primarily as text strings

From: Tom Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>
Date: Mon, 5 Sep 2011 17:46:01 -0400
To: Antoine Isaac <aisaac@few.vu.nl>
Cc: Tom Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>, public-xg-lld@w3.org
Message-ID: <20110905214601.GA54848@julius>
On Mon, Sep 05, 2011 at 11:41:51PM +0200, Antoine Isaac wrote:
> >>OK, I've tried it in
> >>http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Draft_issues_page_take2&diff=6212&oldid=6141
> >>(be careful, this diff includes quite some other changes, including a couple by Tom...)
> >
> >This pulls the two points together into one coherent point
> >quite efficiently.  Nicely done!
> >
> >One minor stylistic suggestion:
> >
> >     s/especially, changes/in particular, that changes/
> 
> This reminds me too much of not elegant French constructions, I could not have thought of that :-)
> But if you think that's alright, feel free to implement it!

DONE [1]...

[1] http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Draft_issues_page_take2&diff=6213&oldid=6212
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