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Re: Library data is expressed primarily as text strings

From: Antoine Isaac <aisaac@few.vu.nl>
Date: Mon, 05 Sep 2011 23:41:51 +0200
Message-ID: <4E65421F.1020801@few.vu.nl>
To: Tom Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>
CC: public-xg-lld@w3.org
On 9/5/11 11:27 PM, Tom Baker wrote:
> On Mon, Sep 05, 2011 at 11:16:57PM +0200, Antoine Isaac wrote:
>> OK, I've tried it in
>> http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Draft_issues_page_take2&diff=6212&oldid=6141
>> (be careful, this diff includes quite some other changes, including a couple by Tom...)
>
> This pulls the two points together into one coherent point
> quite efficiently.  Nicely done!
>
> One minor stylistic suggestion:
>
>      s/especially, changes/in particular, that changes/


This reminds me too much of not elegant French constructions, I could not have thought of that :-)
But if you think that's alright, feel free to implement it!

Antoine
Received on Monday, 5 September 2011 21:40:00 GMT

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