Re: Draft: Executive Summary

It's very good to have a start on this! I think what's there is rather discouraging, particularly in the summary of analysis. Unfortunately I don't have time to look closer and possibly fix it -- but perhaps someone else can push further the start Karen has given us?

I'm not sure whether, for our readers, Linked Data is obvious as a starting point -- so I'd rather that we talk about "great interest in sharing bibliographic data on the Web" rather than the "great interest in sharing bibliographic data on the Web using Linked Data technologies". This is a pretty significant change so I didn't just make it!

-Jodi

On 11 Aug 2011, at 15:35, Karen Coyle wrote:

> There is now a very drafty Executive Summary in the transcluded report. This should stimulate a discussion of what information should be included in the ExecSum. Please read and comment.
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> Our goal is to keep the ExecSum within a single page, so be aware that any information included in this section must be very succinct. However, there is room for expansion as the current draft is especially short.
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> http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/ExecutiveSummary
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