Re: [Fwd: Edits and notes]

Hello All,

I have incorporated these comments into the spec, with the exception of the
suggestion to restructure a couple paragraphs.  Given the difficulty in
correctly formulating them in the first place, I thought it best to leave
them alone at this late date.

Regards,
Joel


public-ws-semann-request@w3.org wrote on 06/19/2007 10:51:26 AM:

> Hi, review comments from Peter Matthews attached.
> Jacek
>
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> From: Matthews, Peter <Peter.Matthews@ca.com>
> To: Jacek Kopecky <jacek.kopecky@deri.org>
> Subject: Edits and notes
> Date: Tue, 19 Jun 2007 15:48:13 +0100
>
> Hi,
>
> Can you circulate this to the appropriate people please.
>
>
> Regards,
> Peter
> Peter Matthews
> Research Staff Member
> CA Labs
> tel: +44 1753 242228
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> peter.matthews@ca.com
>
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