Issue 7553: (Eventing fault messages) Action to improve text

Ram and I took on an action from last week's meeting in order to close 
7553:  http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/ra/9/10/2009-10-13.html#item08. 

Here is our proposal:
WS-Eventing Section 4.1 (Subscribe)
1) Change the text from:
If the event source chooses not to accept a subscription due to the 
content of the Subscribe message, then the event source MUST generate a 
SOAP 1.1 Server fault or a SOAP 1.2 Receiver fault. If the event source 
does not accept this subscription due to an internal processing reason and 
not due to the specific content of the Subscribe message, then the event 
source MUST generate a SOAP 1.1 Server fault or a SOAP 1.2 Receiver fault. 

to:
If the event source chooses not to accept a subscription due to the 
content of the Subscribe message, then the event source MUST generate a 
SOAP 1.1 Client fault or a SOAP 1.2 Sender fault. If the event source does 
not accept this subscription due to an internal processing reason and not 
due to the specific content of the Subscribe message, then the event 
source MUST generate a SOAP 1.1 Server fault or a SOAP 1.2 Receiver fault 
which  MAY contain the RetryAfter fault detail element. 
2) Move the text above so that it occurs directly after "....If this check 
is performed and a problem is detected then the event source MUST generate 
a wse:UnusableEPR fault rather than returning the SubscribeResponse 
message." in order that it is part of the subscribe section rather than 
the subscribe response. 
WS-Eventing Section 4.2 (Renew)

1) Change the text from:
If the subscription manager chooses not to renew this subscription, the 
request MUST fail, and the subscription manager MUST generate a SOAP 1.1 
Server fault or a SOAP 1.2 Receiver fault indicating that the renewal was 
not accepted. 
to:
If the subscription manager chooses not to renew this subscription, the 
request MUST fail, and the subscription manager MUST generate a SOAP 1.1 
Server fault or a SOAP 1.2 Receiver fault indicating that the renewal was 
not accepted. This fault MAY contain the RetryAfter fault detail element. 

2) Move the text above so that it occurs directly after "If the 
subscription is not active, the request MUST fail and the subscription 
manager MAY generate a wse:UnknownSubscription fault." in order that it is 
part of the renew section rather than the renew response

Thanks,
Katy







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