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Re: snapshot review

From: Doug Davis <dug@us.ibm.com>
Date: Fri, 15 May 2009 19:57:46 -0400
To: Gilbert Pilz <gilbert.pilz@oracle.com>
Cc: "public-ws-resource-access@w3.org" <public-ws-resource-access@w3.org>, public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org
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Fixed - thanks!

thanks
-Doug
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Gilbert Pilz <gilbert.pilz@oracle.com> 
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On reviewing the snapshots I found the following editorial nits:

WS-T, Section 2.5: The sentence beginning "Specifically, a compliant SOAP 
Node"; the 'Specifically' seems to be a hold-over from this sentence's 
previous location. Suggest removing this word.

WS-RT, Section 3.3: s/Web Services Transfer namespace URI/Web Services 
Resource Transfer namespace URI/

WS-Eventing, Section 3.3: s/Web Services Transfer namespace URI/Web 
Services Eventing namespace URI/

- gp
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