Comments received on the "Status of this document" Section in our candidate FPWDs

Ralph Swick has provided comment on our "Status of this Document"  
Section
In that comment, he made the point that the purpose of the document is  
not well described

he says (in part)
"The SoTD says "This version is strictly based on the original
Member Submission." Are there no changes at all?  For what
purpose is the Group publishing this document?  I presume
you have a purpose for publishing at this time and I urge you
to state those purpose(s) in the SoTD so that the community
may know what specifically it should be looking for in this
version of this document.

  "None of the issues raised on the original Member Submission
  were incorporated in this document.."
"

and further "The SoTD only solicits reports of "errors".  I  also urge  
you to
change that to a broader solicitation for comments. "

Would anyone in the WG object if we changed in each of the five drafts  
(representative sample from WS-Enumeration):

" This section describes the status of this document at the time of  
its publication. Other documents may supersede this document. A list  
of current W3C publications and the latest revision of this technical  
report can be found in the W3C technical reports index  at http://www.w3.org/TR/ 
.

This is the First Public Working Draft of "Web Services Enumeration  
(WS-Enumeration)".

This version is strictly based on the original Member Submission. None  
of the issues raised on the original Member Submission were  
incorporated in this document.

It has been produced by the Web Services Resource Access Working Group  
(WG), which is part of the W3C Web Services Activity.

Please report errors in this document to the public public-ws-resource-access-comments@w3.org 
  mailing list ( public archive). "

to

" This section describes the status of this document at the time of  
its publication. Other documents may supersede this document. A list  
of current W3C publications and the latest revision of this technical  
report can be found in the W3C technical reports index  at http://www.w3.org/TR/ 
.

This is the First Public Working Draft of "Web Services Enumeration  
(WS-Enumeration)" and is being published for the purpose of soliciting  
public comment.

This version is strictly based on the original Member Submission. None  
of the issues raised on the original Member Submission were  
incorporated in this document in order to permit the public the same  
access for review as enjoyed by the working group.

It has been produced by the <a>Web Services Resource Access Working  
Group (WG)</a>, which is part of the W3C Web Services Activity. The  
working group <a>page</a> provides detailed information on current  
open and resolved issues as relates to this and the related  
specifications produced by this working group.

Please provide comments on this document to the public public-ws-resource-access-comments@w3.org 
  mailing list ( public archive). "

Since we are eager to get this wrapped up, please be prepared to  
discus this and decide on our call of 2009-03-03

thanks
-bob