[Bug 6725] Editorial comments on Eventing 2009-03-17 WD

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6725


Doug Davis <dug@us.ibm.com> changed:

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--- Comment #1 from Doug Davis <dug@us.ibm.com>  2009-03-23 18:29:04 ---
Proposal:
Change all uses of "event messages" with "notifications".  The first use will
actually just be deleted since "notifications" is already in that sentence.

Change:
Subscription Manager
    A Web service that accepts requests to manage get the status of, renew,
and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source. 

To:
Subscription Manager
    A Web service that accepts requests to manage, get the status of, renew,
and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source. 

Added a comma after "manage".  I think its the right word.


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Received on Monday, 23 March 2009 18:29:14 UTC