[Bug 6725] New: Editorial comments on Eventing 2009-03-17 WD

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6725

           Summary: Editorial comments on Eventing 2009-03-17 WD
           Product: WS-Resource Access
           Version: FPWD
          Platform: PC
               URL: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-resource-
                    access-comments/2009Mar/0001.html
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Keywords: externalComments
          Severity: minor
          Priority: P2
         Component: Eventing
        AssignedTo: public-ws-resource-access-notifications@w3.org
        ReportedBy: bob@freunds.com
         QAContact: public-ws-resource-access-notifications@w3.org


I have two minor comments on the March 17th draft:

- Terminology (3.3): I wonder about the difference between "event 
message" and "notification". The former should be defined, or uniformly 
replaced by the latter imho.
- Terminology (3.3): leftover "manage" in the definition of 
"Subscription Manager"

Best,

Eric Dujardin

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Received on Monday, 23 March 2009 14:57:33 GMT


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