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Index: wsmex.xml
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wsmex.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.38
retrieving revision 1.39
diff -u -d -r1.38 -r1.39
--- wsmex.xml	18 Aug 2009 21:10:01 -0000	1.38
+++ wsmex.xml	18 Aug 2009 21:32:44 -0000	1.39
@@ -123,11 +123,11 @@
     endpoint references, and how Web service endpoints can optionally 
     support a request-response interaction for the retrieval of metadata.
     When the type of metadata sought is clearly known, e.g., 
-    <bibref ref='WS-Policy'/>, a requester may indicate that only that 
-    type should be returned; where additional types of metadata are being 
+    <bibref ref='WS-Policy'/>, a requester MAY indicate that only that 
+    type is to be returned; where additional types of metadata are being 
     used, or are expected, or when a requester needs to retrieve all of 
     the metadata relevant to subsequent interactions with an endpoint, a 
-    requester may indicate that all available metadata, regardless of their 
+    requester MAY indicate that all available metadata, regardless of their 
     types, are expected.
    </p>
 
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@
      resource's representation. In this case, the requested representation 
      is the WS-Metadata Exchange Metadata element about a Web service 
      endpoint. The fact that the resource's representation is a 
-     mex:Metadata element may be known to the requestor but is not 
+     mex:Metadata element might be known to the requestor but is not 
      explicitly encoded in the request message.
     </p>
 
@@ -359,7 +359,7 @@
      a WS-Transfer GET request directed to the endpoint identified by the 
      mex:MetadataReference element in lines 72-76 of 
      <specref ref="GetResponse"/>,
-     some endpoints may choose to support explicit request for metadata. 
+     some endpoints MAY choose to support explicit request for metadata. 
      <specref ref="GetMexReq"/> illustrates a sample GetMetadata request 
      for the <bibref ref ='WS-Policy'/>.
     </p>
@@ -777,8 +777,8 @@
    <p>
     To facilitate processing, Metadata Sections are tagged with a 
     @Dialect and (optionally) @Identifier of the metadata unit. To ensure 
-    scalability, a unit of metadata may be included in-line within its 
-    Metadata Section or may be included by reference, either an endpoint 
+    scalability, a unit of metadata MAY be included in-line within its 
+    Metadata Section or MAY be included by reference, either an endpoint 
     reference <bibref ref='AddrCore'/> 
     (Metadata Reference) or a URL (Location).
    </p>
@@ -853,7 +853,7 @@
 
    <p>
     This specification defines the following values for Dialect; 
-    other specifications should define values for Dialect for their 
+    other specifications SHOULD define values for Dialect for their 
     metadata format(s).
    </p>
 
@@ -1040,7 +1040,7 @@
      MAY send a <bibref ref='WS-Transfer'/> Get request message to the 
      metadata resource's endpoint. The WS-Transfer Get request fetches a 
      one-time snapshot of the metadata. The metadata associated with a 
-     service endpoint may be available as multiple metadata resources. 
+     service endpoint MAY be available as multiple metadata resources. 
     </p>
 
     <p>
@@ -1457,11 +1457,11 @@
    </p>  
    
    <p>
-    When that information is not available, however, requesters must 
+    When that information is not available, however, requesters will 
     rely on contextual or out-of-band information in order to choose 
     the protocol binding most appropriate to use in retrieving Web 
     service metadata. Furthermore, specific protocol bindings for 
-    metadata retrieval may be defined by communities within the 
+    metadata retrieval MAY be defined by communities within the 
     context of particular application domains. 
    </p>
   </div1>
@@ -1481,13 +1481,13 @@
    </p>
    
    <p>
-    Different security mechanisms may be desired depending on the 
+    Different security mechanisms might be desired depending on the 
     frequency of messages. For example, for infrequent messages, public key 
-    technologies may be adequate for integrity and confidentiality. 
-    However, for high-frequency events, it may be more performant to 
+    technologies might be adequate for integrity and confidentiality. 
+    However, for high-frequency events, it might be more performant to 
     establish a security context for the events using the mechanisms 
     described in <bibref ref='WS-Trust'/> and 
-    <bibref ref='WS-SecureConversation'/>. It should be noted that if 
+    <bibref ref='WS-SecureConversation'/>. Note that if 
     a shared secret is used it is RECOMMENDED that derived keys be used 
     to strengthen the secret as described in WS-SecureConversation.
    </p>
@@ -1511,7 +1511,7 @@
    
    <p>
     Additionally, some metadata formats, such as policies 
-    <bibref ref='WS-Policy'/>, may have embedded security 
+    <bibref ref='WS-Policy'/>, can have embedded security 
     semantics. These SHOULD be verified using the same considerations 
     outlined in this section.
    </p>
@@ -1562,7 +1562,7 @@
      <p>
       <kw>Availability</kw> - Metadata services are subject to a variety 
       of availability attacks such as application-level denial of 
-      service. It is recommended that the mechanisms described in 
+      service. It is RECOMMENDED that the mechanisms described in 
       WS-Security be considered as mitigations for some forms of 
       attacks. Other attacks, such as network-level denial of service 
       are harder to avoid. Note that both of these classes of attack 
@@ -1571,8 +1571,8 @@
     </item>
     <item>
      <p>
-      <kw>Replay</kw> - Messages may be replayed for a variety of 
-      reasons. To detect and eliminate this attack, mechanisms should 
+      <kw>Replay</kw> - Messages can be replayed for a variety of 
+      reasons. To detect and eliminate this attack, mechanisms SHOULD 
       be used to identify replayed messages such as the timestamp/nonce 
       outlined in WS-Security. Alternatively, and optionally, other 
       technologies, such as sequencing, can also be used to prevent 
@@ -1742,7 +1742,7 @@
    
    <p>
     A normative copy of the XML Schema <bibref ref='Schema1'/>,
-    <bibref ref='Schema2'/> description for this specification may be 
+    <bibref ref='Schema2'/> description for this specification can be 
     retrieved from the following address:
    </p>
    
@@ -1839,7 +1839,7 @@
    
    <p>
     A normative copy of the WSDL <bibref ref='WSDL11'/> description for 
-    this specification may be retrieved from the following address:
+    this specification can be retrieved from the following address:
    </p>
    
    <example>
@@ -2060,6 +2060,13 @@
        <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=7206">7206</loc>
       </td>
      </tr>
+     <tr>
+      <td> 2009/08/18 </td>
+      <td> DD </td>
+      <td> Added resolution of issue 
+       <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=7195">7195</loc>
+      </td>
+     </tr>
     </tbody>
    </table>
   </div1>

Index: wsmex.html
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wsmex.html,v
retrieving revision 1.48
retrieving revision 1.49
diff -u -d -r1.48 -r1.49
--- wsmex.html	18 Aug 2009 20:54:31 -0000	1.48
+++ wsmex.html	18 Aug 2009 21:32:44 -0000	1.49
@@ -89,11 +89,11 @@
     endpoint references, and how Web service endpoints can optionally 
     support a request-response interaction for the retrieval of metadata.
     When the type of metadata sought is clearly known, e.g., 
-    <a href="#WS-Policy">[WS-Policy]</a>, a requester may indicate that only that 
-    type should be returned; where additional types of metadata are being 
+    <a href="#WS-Policy">[WS-Policy]</a>, a requester MAY indicate that only that 
+    type is to be returned; where additional types of metadata are being 
     used, or are expected, or when a requester needs to retrieve all of 
     the metadata relevant to subsequent interactions with an endpoint, a 
-    requester may indicate that all available metadata, regardless of their 
+    requester MAY indicate that all available metadata, regardless of their 
     types, are expected.
    </p><p>
     The mechanisms defined herein are intended for the retrieval of 
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
      resource's representation. In this case, the requested representation 
      is the WS-Metadata Exchange Metadata element about a Web service 
      endpoint. The fact that the resource's representation is a 
-     mex:Metadata element may be known to the requestor but is not 
+     mex:Metadata element might be known to the requestor but is not 
      explicitly encoded in the request message.
     </p><p><a href="#GetResponse">Example 2-2</a> illustrates a sample response to the 
      request of <a href="#GetRequest">Example 2-1</a>.
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
      a WS-Transfer GET request directed to the endpoint identified by the 
      mex:MetadataReference element in lines 72-76 of 
      <a href="#GetResponse">Example 2-2</a>,
-     some endpoints may choose to support explicit request for metadata. 
+     some endpoints MAY choose to support explicit request for metadata. 
      <a href="#GetMexReq">Example 2-3</a> illustrates a sample GetMetadata request 
      for the <a href="#WS-Policy">[WS-Policy]</a>.
     </p><div class="exampleOuter">
@@ -410,8 +410,8 @@
      In cases where it is either desirable or necessary for the receiver
      of a request that has been extended to indicate that it has
      recognized and accepted the semantics associated with that extension,
-     it is recommended that the receiver add a corresponding extension
-     to the response message.  The definition of an extension should clearly
+     it is RECOMMENDED that the receiver add a corresponding extension
+     to the response message.  The definition of an extension SHOULD clearly
      specify how the extension that appears in the response correlates
      with that in the corresponding request.
     </p><p>
@@ -478,8 +478,8 @@
    </p><p>
     To facilitate processing, Metadata Sections are tagged with a 
     @Dialect and (optionally) @Identifier of the metadata unit. To ensure 
-    scalability, a unit of metadata may be included in-line within its 
-    Metadata Section or may be included by reference, either an endpoint 
+    scalability, a unit of metadata MAY be included in-line within its 
+    Metadata Section or MAY be included by reference, either an endpoint 
     reference <a href="#AddrCore">[WS-Addressing]</a> 
     (Metadata Reference) or a URL (Location).
    </p><p>
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@
        <a href="#RFC3986">[RFC 3986]</a> section 6.2.1.
       </p></dd></dl><p>
     This specification defines the following values for Dialect; 
-    other specifications should define values for Dialect for their 
+    other specifications SHOULD define values for Dialect for their 
     metadata format(s).
    </p><table border="1"><tbody><tr><th align="left"> Dialect URI </th><th align="left"> Metadata Format </th></tr><tr><td> http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema </td><td> xs:schema <a href="#Schema1">[XML Schema: Structures]</a></td></tr><tr><td> http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/wsdl/ </td><td> wsdl:definitions <a href="#WSDL11">[WSDL 1.1]</a></td></tr><tr><td> http://www.w3.org/ns/ws-policy </td><td> wsp:Policy <a href="#WS-Policy">[WS-Policy]</a></td></tr><tr><td> http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach </td><td> wsp:PolicyAttachment <a href="#WS-PolicyAttachment">[WS-PolicyAttachment]</a></td></tr><tr><td> http://www.w3.org/2009/02/ws-mex/Dialects/ws-mex </td><td> mex:Metadata [Defined in this specification] </td></tr><tr><td> http://www.w3.org/2009/02/ws-mex/Dialects/ws-mex-all </td><td> None.  [Defined in this specification for use in GetMetadata requests.  See <a href="#Get-Metadata"><b>6.2 Get Metadata</b></a>.] </td></tr></tbody></table><p>
     If there is more than one metadata unit with the same Dialect, e.g., 
@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@
      MAY send a <a href="#WS-Transfer">[WS-Transfer]</a> Get request message to the 
      metadata resource's endpoint. The WS-Transfer Get request fetches a 
      one-time snapshot of the metadata. The metadata associated with a 
-     service endpoint may be available as multiple metadata resources. 
+     service endpoint MAY be available as multiple metadata resources. 
     </p><p>
      The representation of a metadata resource MAY be a mex:Metadata 
      element which MAY contain one or more mex:MetadataSection children.  
@@ -854,11 +854,11 @@
     resource, or a GetMetadata request against a service endpoint, in 
     order to retrieve all the information needed to use the service.
    </p><p>
-    When that information is not available, however, requesters must 
+    When that information is not available, however, requesters will 
     rely on contextual or out-of-band information in order to choose 
     the protocol binding most appropriate to use in retrieving Web 
     service metadata. Furthermore, specific protocol bindings for 
-    metadata retrieval may be defined by communities within the 
+    metadata retrieval MAY be defined by communities within the 
     context of particular application domains. 
    </p></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="Security" id="Security"/>9 Security</h2><p>
@@ -871,13 +871,13 @@
     <a href="#AddrCore">[WS-Addressing]</a>, need to be signed with the body in 
     order to "bind" the two together.
    </p><p>
-    Different security mechanisms may be desired depending on the 
+    Different security mechanisms might be desired depending on the 
     frequency of messages. For example, for infrequent messages, public key 
-    technologies may be adequate for integrity and confidentiality. 
-    However, for high-frequency events, it may be more performant to 
+    technologies might be adequate for integrity and confidentiality. 
+    However, for high-frequency events, it might be more performant to 
     establish a security context for the events using the mechanisms 
     described in <a href="#WS-Trust">[WS-Trust]</a> and 
-    <a href="#WS-SecureConversation">[WS-SecureConversation]</a>. It should be noted that if 
+    <a href="#WS-SecureConversation">[WS-SecureConversation]</a>. Note that if 
     a shared secret is used it is RECOMMENDED that derived keys be used 
     to strengthen the secret as described in WS-SecureConversation.
    </p><p>
@@ -895,7 +895,7 @@
     of the sender. 
    </p><p>
     Additionally, some metadata formats, such as policies 
-    <a href="#WS-Policy">[WS-Policy]</a>, may have embedded security 
+    <a href="#WS-Policy">[WS-Policy]</a>, can have embedded security 
     semantics. These SHOULD be verified using the same considerations 
     outlined in this section.
    </p><p>
@@ -919,13 +919,13 @@
       However, in some environments, strong PKI signatures are required.
      </p></li><li><p><b>Availability</b> - Metadata services are subject to a variety 
       of availability attacks such as application-level denial of 
-      service. It is recommended that the mechanisms described in 
+      service. It is RECOMMENDED that the mechanisms described in 
       WS-Security be considered as mitigations for some forms of 
       attacks. Other attacks, such as network-level denial of service 
       are harder to avoid. Note that both of these classes of attack 
       are outside the scope of this specification.
-     </p></li><li><p><b>Replay</b> - Messages may be replayed for a variety of 
-      reasons. To detect and eliminate this attack, mechanisms should 
+     </p></li><li><p><b>Replay</b> - Messages can be replayed for a variety of 
+      reasons. To detect and eliminate this attack, mechanisms SHOULD 
       be used to identify replayed messages such as the timestamp/nonce 
       outlined in WS-Security. Alternatively, and optionally, other 
       technologies, such as sequencing, can also be used to prevent 
@@ -1016,7 +1016,7 @@
       (See http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-xmlschema-2-20041028/.)</dd></dl></div></div><div class="back"><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="Appendix-A" id="Appendix-A"/>A XML Schema</h2><p>
     A normative copy of the XML Schema <a href="#Schema1">[XML Schema: Structures]</a>,
-    <a href="#Schema2">[XML Schema: Datatypes]</a> description for this specification may be 
+    <a href="#Schema2">[XML Schema: Datatypes]</a> description for this specification can be 
     retrieved from the following address:
    </p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre><a href="http://www.w3.org/2009/02/ws-mex/MetadataExchange.xsd">http://www.w3.org/2009/02/ws-mex/MetadataExchange.xsd</a></pre></div></div><p>
     A non-normative copy of the XML Schema description is listed below for 
@@ -1098,7 +1098,7 @@
 &lt;/xs:schema&gt;</pre></div></div></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="Appendix-B" id="Appendix-B"/>B WSDL</h2><p>
     A normative copy of the WSDL <a href="#WSDL11">[WSDL 1.1]</a> description for 
-    this specification may be retrieved from the following address:
+    this specification can be retrieved from the following address:
    </p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre><a href="http://www.w3.org/2009/02/ws-mex/metadataexchange.wsdl">http://www.w3.org/2009/02/ws-mex/metadataexchange.wsdl</a></pre></div></div><p>
     A non-normative copy of the WSDL description is listed below for 
     convenience. 
@@ -1160,4 +1160,5 @@
        <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6720">6720</a></td></tr><tr><td> 2009/08/06 </td><td> DD </td><td> Added resolution of issue 
        <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=7194">7194</a></td></tr><tr><td> 2009/08/06 </td><td> DD </td><td> Added resolution of issue 
        <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6679">6679</a></td></tr><tr><td> 2009/08/18 </td><td> DD </td><td> Added resolution of issue 
-       <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=7206">7206</a></td></tr></tbody></table></div></div></body></html>
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+       <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=7195">7195</a></td></tr></tbody></table></div></div></body></html>
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