[Bug 6725] Eventing: Editorial comments on Eventing 2009-03-17 WD

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6725


Asir S Vedamuthu <asirveda@microsoft.com> changed:

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--- Comment #2 from Asir S Vedamuthu <asirveda@microsoft.com>  2009-04-07 20:08:03 ---
Proposal from Ram

Suggested change:

•       Section 3.3 [1]: In the definition of “Delivery Mode”, change “The
mechanism by which event messages are delivered from the source to the sink” to
“The mechanism by which event messages (or notifications) are delivered from
the source to the sink.”.
•       Section 3.3 [1]: In the definition of “Subscription Manager”: Change “A
Web service that accepts requests to manage get the status of, renew, and/or
delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source.” To “A Web service that
accepts requests to create, get the status of, renew, and/or delete
subscriptions on behalf of an event source.”.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-ws-eventing-20090317/#terms


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