Re: Formal Request: WG Approval of updated Primer and Framework Errata

Felix Sasaki さんは書きました:
>
> Hello Frederick,
>
> just FYI:
>
> Frederick Hirsch さんは書きました:
>> Attached are an update to the Framework Errata document, and a new 
>> Primer Errata document.
>>
>> This message is requesting the chairs and WG for formal WG approval 
>> of these documents and publication.
>>
>> Once approved they can be checked into CVS [1]. This will update the 
>> content referenced from the Framework Recommendation [2] to the 
>> Framework Errata, making the Framework errata visible.
>>
>> The Primer Note does not have a link to the errata. I recommend that 
>> the WS-Policy WG home page [3] be updated with a link to the Errata 
>> document for the Primer.
>
> From the W3C process you can have an errata document only for 
> Recommendations. However, if the WG is fine to maintain a document 
> like what your propose, that's fine. You just have to be aware of the 
> informal status of that document.
>
>>
>> Separately I ask whether we might also update the note to include a 
>> link to the primer errata document.
>
> I'm not sure if that is OK - to publish a WG Note with a link to an 
> errata document. I'll check and come back to you.

I checked, it's OK to publish a new version of the Note that links to the errata
document. Meanwhile, if there are primer errata, you may take the
opportunity to integrate them.


Felix

>
> Felix
>
>>
>> Thanks to Asir for reviewing drafts of the errata documents.
>>
>> regards, Frederick
>>
>> Frederick Hirsch
>> Nokia
>>
>> [1] they would both be checked into the directory 
>> WWW/2002/ws/policy/7 in /w3ccvs
>>
>> [2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/
>>
>> [3] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/ , Add errata link next to entry 
>> in bullet list for primer
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> W3C <http://www.w3.org/>
>>
>>
>>   Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework Errata
>>
>>
>>     21 November 2008
>>
>> Latest version:
>>     http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/7/framework-errata.html Editors:
>>     Asir S Vedamuthu, Microsoft Corporation
>>     David Orchard, BEA Systems, Inc.
>>     Frederick Hirsch, Nokia
>>     Maryann Hondo, IBM Corporation
>>     Prasad Yendluri, webMethods (A subsidiary of Software AG)
>>     Toufic Boubez, Layer 7 Technologies
>>     Ümit Yalçinalp, SAP AG.
>>
>> Last modified: $Date: 2007/09/25 03:43:31 $
>>
>> Copyright <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright> 
>> (©) 2007 W3C <http://www.w3.org/>^® (MIT <http://www.csail.mit.edu/>, 
>> ERCIM <http://www.ercim.org/>, Keio <http://www.keio.ac.jp/>), All 
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>> rules apply.
>>
>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>>
>>     Abstract
>>
>> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 
>> - Framework <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/> 
>> specification; for updates see the latest version of that document.
>>
>> The errata are numbered, classified as Substantive <#substantive> or 
>> Editorial <#editorial>, and listed in reverse chronological order of 
>> their date of publication in each category.
>>
>> Each entry has the following information:
>>
>>     * A unique entry number
>>     * The date it was added to the errata page.
>>     * The section referred to.
>>     * A description of the problem and correction if applicable.
>>       Changes to the text of the spec are indicated thus: deleted
>>       text, new text, modified text .
>>     * A rationale for making the change (not required for editorial
>>       errata).
>>
>> Changes to the text of the specification are indicated thus: new, 
>> added text, modified text, and deleted text. Substantive corrections 
>> are proposed by the Web Services Policy Working Group 
>> <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/> (part of the Web Services 
>> Activity <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/>), which has consensus that they 
>> are appropriate; they are not to be considered normative until 
>> approved by a Call for Review of Proposed Corrections 
>> <http://www.w3.org/2004/02/Process-20040205/tr.html#cfr-corrections> 
>> or a Call for Review of an Edited Recommendation 
>> <http://www.w3.org/2004/02/Process-20040205/tr.html#cfr-edited>.
>>
>> The Working Group is tracking all comments via Bugzilla 
>> <http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/buglist.cgi?query_format=advanced&short_desc_type=allwordssubstr&short_desc=&product=WS-Policy&component=Framework&component=Framework%2BAttachment&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BGuidelines&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BPrimer> 
>> and highly prefers to receive comments via this system. If access to 
>> Bugzilla is not feasible, you may send your comments to the mailing 
>> list public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org 
>> <mailto:public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org> mailing list (public 
>> archive 
>> <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-comments/>). 
>> Each Bugzilla entry and email message should contain only one 
>> comment. All comments on this specification should be made following 
>> the Description for Issues <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/#issues> 
>> of the Working Group. It will be very helpful if you include the 
>> string [WS-Policy-errata] in the subject line of your comment.
>>
>>
>>     Status of this Document
>>
>> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 
>> - Framework <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/> 
>> specification; that were known at the time of publication of this 
>> document.
>>
>> None of the errata reported in this document have been approved by a 
>> Call for Review of Proposed Corrections or a Call for Review of an 
>> Edited Recommendation. As a consequence, they must not be considered 
>> to be normative.
>>
>>
>>     Table of Contents
>>
>> 1 Substantive Errata <#substantive>
>> 2 Editorial Errata <#editorial>
>>
>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>>
>>     1 Substantive Errata
>>
>> No substantive errata at present
>>
>>
>>     2 Editorial Errata
>>
>>
>>       E01
>>
>> Date Added: 2008-11-21
>>
>> Summary: Note on using xml:id should reference Canonical XML 1.1 and 
>> XML Signature, Second Edition. References should be updated.
>>
>>
>>         Section *4.2, Policy Identification*
>>         
>> <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#Policy_Identification> 
>>
>>
>>   1.
>>
>>       Replace the text of the second Note
>>
>>           *Note:*
>>           Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11
>>           <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#C14N11>]
>>           is intended to address the issues that occur with Canonical
>>           XML 1.0 with regards to xml:id. The W3C XML Security
>>           Specifications Maintenance WG has been chartered to address
>>           how to integrate Canonical XML 1.1 with XML Security,
>>           including XML Signature [SecSpecMaintWG
>>           
>> <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#SecSpecMaintWG>]
>>           (See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/.)
>>       with the following text:
>>
>>           *Note:*
>>           Note that is acceptable to sign a policy expression
>>           identified using xml:id with XML SIgnature (Second Edition)
>>           [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] and Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11],
>>           as these recommendations address issues related to the use
>>           of xml:id and xml:base.
>>       where XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link to a new reference
>>       added to the document.
>>
>>
>>         Appendix *B.2 Other References*
>>         
>> <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#Informative-References> 
>>
>>
>>   1.
>>
>>       Update the reference to C14N11, as follows:
>>
>>           Canonical XML 1.1, J. Boyer and G. Marcy Authors. W3C
>>           Candidate Recommendation, 21 June 2007. This is a work in
>>           progress. This version is available at
>>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/CR-xml-c14n11-20070621.2 May 2008.
>>           This version is available at
>>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-c14n11-20080502. The
>>           latest version of Canonical XML 1.1 is available at
>>           http://www.w3.org/TR//xml-c14n11/.
>>   2.
>>
>>       Add a reference to XML Signature (Second Edition) after the
>>       reference to [XMLSignature]:
>>
>>           [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] XML Signature Syntax and
>>           Processing, D. Eastlake, J. Reagle, D. Solo, F. Hirsch, and
>>           T. Roessler Editors. W3C Recommendation, 10 June 2008. This
>>           version of the XML Signature Syntax and Processing
>>           Recommendation is
>>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xmldsig-core-20080610/. The
>>           latest version of XML-Signature Syntax and Processing is
>>           available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/.
>>       XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link target. Note the removal of
>>       the hyphen in the title of the Second Edition.
>>
>>   3.
>>
>>       Remove reference to XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>>       Working Group, [SecSpecMaintWG], as the text that referenced it
>>       has been removed as part of E01:
>>
>>           [SecSpecMaintWG] XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>>           Working Group , See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec.
>>
>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> W3C <http://www.w3.org/>
>>
>>
>>   Web Services Policy 1.5 - Primer Errata
>>
>>
>>     21 November 2008
>>
>> Latest version:
>>     http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/7/primer-errata.html Editors:
>>     Asir S Vedamuthu, Microsoft Corporation
>>     David Orchard, BEA Systems, Inc.
>>     Frederick Hirsch, Nokia
>>     Maryann Hondo, IBM Corporation
>>     Prasad Yendluri, webMethods (A subsidiary of Software AG)
>>     Toufic Boubez, Layer 7 Technologies
>>     Ümit Yalçinalp, SAP AG.
>>
>> Last modified: $Date: 2007/09/25 03:43:31 $
>>
>> Copyright <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright> 
>> (©) 2007 W3C <http://www.w3.org/>^® (MIT <http://www.csail.mit.edu/>, 
>> ERCIM <http://www.ercim.org/>, Keio <http://www.keio.ac.jp/>), All 
>> Rights Reserved. W3C liability 
>> <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Legal_Disclaimer>, 
>> trademark 
>> <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#W3C_Trademarks> and 
>> document use <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/copyright-documents> 
>> rules apply.
>>
>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>>
>>     Abstract
>>
>> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 
>> - Primer <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/> 
>> Working Group Note ; for updates see the latest version of that 
>> document.
>>
>> The errata are numbered, classified as Substantive <#substantive> or 
>> Editorial <#editorial>, and listed in reverse chronological order of 
>> their date of publication in each category.
>>
>> Each entry has the following information:
>>
>>     * A unique entry number
>>     * The date it was added to the errata page.
>>     * The section referred to.
>>     * A description of the problem and correction if applicable.
>>       Changes to the text of the spec are indicated thus: deleted
>>       text, new text, modified text .
>>     * A rationale for making the change (not required for editorial
>>       errata).
>>
>> Changes to the text of the specification are indicated thus: new, 
>> added text, modified text, and deleted text.
>>
>> The Working Group is tracking all comments via Bugzilla 
>> <http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/buglist.cgi?query_format=advanced&short_desc_type=allwordssubstr&short_desc=&product=WS-Policy&component=Framework&component=Framework%2BAttachment&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BGuidelines&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BPrimer> 
>> and highly prefers to receive comments via this system. If access to 
>> Bugzilla is not feasible, you may send your comments to the mailing 
>> list public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org 
>> <mailto:public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org> mailing list (public 
>> archive 
>> <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-comments/>). 
>> Each Bugzilla entry and email message should contain only one 
>> comment. All comments on this specification should be made following 
>> the Description for Issues <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/#issues> 
>> of the Working Group. It will be very helpful if you include the 
>> string [WS-Policy-errata] in the subject line of your comment.
>>
>>
>>     Status of this Document
>>
>> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 
>> - Primer <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/> 
>> Working Group Note that were known at the time of publication of this 
>> document.
>>
>>
>>     Table of Contents
>>
>> 1 Substantive Errata <#substantive>
>> 2 Editorial Errata <#editorial>
>>
>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>>
>>     1 Substantive Errata
>>
>> No substantive errata at present
>>
>>
>>     2 Editorial Errata
>>
>>
>>       E01
>>
>> Date Added: 2008-11-21
>>
>> Summary: Note on using xml:id should reference Canonical XML 1.1 and 
>> XML Signature, Second Edition. References should be updated.
>>
>>
>>         Section *2.10 Referencing Policy Expressions*
>>         
>> <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/#Referencing_Policy_Expressions> 
>>
>>
>>   1.
>>
>>       Replace the text of the Note
>>
>>           *Note:*
>>           Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11
>>           <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#C14N11>]
>>           is intended to address the issues that occur with Canonical
>>           XML 1.0 with regards to xml:id. The W3C XML Security
>>           Specifications Maintenance WG has been chartered to address
>>           how to integrate Canonical XML 1.1 with XML Security,
>>           including XML Signature [SecSpecMaintWG
>>           
>> <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#SecSpecMaintWG>]
>>           (See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/.)
>>       with the following text:
>>
>>           *Note:*
>>           Note that is acceptable to sign a policy expression
>>           identified using xml:id with XML SIgnature (Second Edition)
>>           [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] and Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11],
>>           as these recommendations address issues related to the use
>>           of xml:id and xml:base.
>>       where XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link to a new reference
>>       added to the document.
>>
>>
>>         Appendix *C References*
>>         
>> <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/#references>
>>
>>   1.
>>
>>       Update the reference to C14N11, as follows:
>>
>>           Canonical XML 1.1, J. Boyer and G. Marcy Authors. W3C
>>           Candidate Recommendation, 21 June 2007. This is a work in
>>           progress. This version is available at
>>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/CR-xml-c14n11-20070621.2 May 2008.
>>           This version is available at
>>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-c14n11-20080502. The
>>           latest version of Canonical XML 1.1 is available at
>>           http://www.w3.org/TR//xml-c14n11/.
>>   2.
>>
>>       Add a reference to XML Signature (Second Edition) after the
>>       reference to [C14N11]:
>>
>>           [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] XML Signature Syntax and
>>           Processing, D. Eastlake, J. Reagle, D. Solo, F. Hirsch, and
>>           T. Roessler Editors. W3C Recommendation, 10 June 2008. This
>>           version of the XML Signature Syntax and Processing
>>           Recommendation is
>>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xmldsig-core-20080610/. The
>>           latest version of XML-Signature Syntax and Processing is
>>           available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/.
>>       XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link target. Note the removal of
>>       the hyphen in the title of the Second Edition.
>>
>>   3.
>>
>>       Remove reference to XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>>       Working Group, [SecSpecMaintWG], as the text that referenced it
>>       has been removed as part of E01:
>>
>>           [SecSpecMaintWG] XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>>           Working Group , See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec.
>>
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