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Re: Formal Request: WG Approval of updated Primer and Framework Errata

From: Felix Sasaki <fsasaki@w3.org>
Date: Sat, 22 Nov 2008 11:27:10 +0900
Message-ID: <49276DFE.8070603@w3.org>
To: Frederick Hirsch <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com>
CC: public-ws-policy@w3.org, W3C WS-Policy Editors <public-ws-policy-eds@w3.org>

Hello Frederick,

just FYI:

Frederick Hirsch さんは書きました:
> Attached are an update to the Framework Errata document, and a new 
> Primer Errata document.
>
> This message is requesting the chairs and WG for formal WG approval of 
> these documents and publication.
>
> Once approved they can be checked into CVS [1]. This will update the 
> content referenced from the Framework Recommendation [2] to the 
> Framework Errata, making the Framework errata visible.
>
> The Primer Note does not have a link to the errata. I recommend that 
> the WS-Policy WG home page [3] be updated with a link to the Errata 
> document for the Primer.

 From the W3C process you can have an errata document only for 
Recommendations. However, if the WG is fine to maintain a document like 
what your propose, that's fine. You just have to be aware of the 
informal status of that document.

>
> Separately I ask whether we might also update the note to include a 
> link to the primer errata document.

I'm not sure if that is OK - to publish a WG Note with a link to an 
errata document. I'll check and come back to you.

Felix

>
> Thanks to Asir for reviewing drafts of the errata documents.
>
> regards, Frederick
>
> Frederick Hirsch
> Nokia
>
> [1] they would both be checked into the directory WWW/2002/ws/policy/7 
> in /w3ccvs
>
> [2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/
>
> [3] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/ , Add errata link next to entry 
> in bullet list for primer
>
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> W3C <http://www.w3.org/>
>
>
>   Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework Errata
>
>
>     21 November 2008
>
> Latest version:
>     http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/7/framework-errata.html 
> Editors:
>     Asir S Vedamuthu, Microsoft Corporation
>     David Orchard, BEA Systems, Inc.
>     Frederick Hirsch, Nokia
>     Maryann Hondo, IBM Corporation
>     Prasad Yendluri, webMethods (A subsidiary of Software AG)
>     Toufic Boubez, Layer 7 Technologies
>     Ümit Yalçinalp, SAP AG.
>
> Last modified: $Date: 2007/09/25 03:43:31 $
>
> Copyright <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright> 
> (©) 2007 W3C <http://www.w3.org/>^® (MIT <http://www.csail.mit.edu/>, 
> ERCIM <http://www.ercim.org/>, Keio <http://www.keio.ac.jp/>), All 
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> rules apply.
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>
>     Abstract
>
> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 
> - Framework <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/> 
> specification; for updates see the latest version of that document.
>
> The errata are numbered, classified as Substantive <#substantive> or 
> Editorial <#editorial>, and listed in reverse chronological order of 
> their date of publication in each category.
>
> Each entry has the following information:
>
>     * A unique entry number
>     * The date it was added to the errata page.
>     * The section referred to.
>     * A description of the problem and correction if applicable.
>       Changes to the text of the spec are indicated thus: deleted
>       text, new text, modified text .
>     * A rationale for making the change (not required for editorial
>       errata).
>
> Changes to the text of the specification are indicated thus: new, 
> added text, modified text, and deleted text. Substantive corrections 
> are proposed by the Web Services Policy Working Group 
> <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/> (part of the Web Services Activity 
> <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/>), which has consensus that they are 
> appropriate; they are not to be considered normative until approved by 
> a Call for Review of Proposed Corrections 
> <http://www.w3.org/2004/02/Process-20040205/tr.html#cfr-corrections> 
> or a Call for Review of an Edited Recommendation 
> <http://www.w3.org/2004/02/Process-20040205/tr.html#cfr-edited>.
>
> The Working Group is tracking all comments via Bugzilla 
> <http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/buglist.cgi?query_format=advanced&short_desc_type=allwordssubstr&short_desc=&product=WS-Policy&component=Framework&component=Framework%2BAttachment&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BGuidelines&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BPrimer> 
> and highly prefers to receive comments via this system. If access to 
> Bugzilla is not feasible, you may send your comments to the mailing 
> list public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org 
> <mailto:public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org> mailing list (public archive 
> <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-comments/>). 
> Each Bugzilla entry and email message should contain only one comment. 
> All comments on this specification should be made following the 
> Description for Issues <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/#issues> of 
> the Working Group. It will be very helpful if you include the string 
> [WS-Policy-errata] in the subject line of your comment.
>
>
>     Status of this Document
>
> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 
> - Framework <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/> 
> specification; that were known at the time of publication of this 
> document.
>
> None of the errata reported in this document have been approved by a 
> Call for Review of Proposed Corrections or a Call for Review of an 
> Edited Recommendation. As a consequence, they must not be considered 
> to be normative.
>
>
>     Table of Contents
>
> 1 Substantive Errata <#substantive>
> 2 Editorial Errata <#editorial>
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>
>     1 Substantive Errata
>
> No substantive errata at present
>
>
>     2 Editorial Errata
>
>
>       E01
>
> Date Added: 2008-11-21
>
> Summary: Note on using xml:id should reference Canonical XML 1.1 and 
> XML Signature, Second Edition. References should be updated.
>
>
>         Section *4.2, Policy Identification*
>         <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#Policy_Identification>
>
>   1.
>
>       Replace the text of the second Note
>
>           *Note:*
>           Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11
>           <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#C14N11>]
>           is intended to address the issues that occur with Canonical
>           XML 1.0 with regards to xml:id. The W3C XML Security
>           Specifications Maintenance WG has been chartered to address
>           how to integrate Canonical XML 1.1 with XML Security,
>           including XML Signature [SecSpecMaintWG
>           <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#SecSpecMaintWG>]
>           (See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/.) 
>
>       with the following text:
>
>           *Note:*
>           Note that is acceptable to sign a policy expression
>           identified using xml:id with XML SIgnature (Second Edition)
>           [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] and Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11],
>           as these recommendations address issues related to the use
>           of xml:id and xml:base. 
>
>       where XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link to a new reference
>       added to the document.
>
>
>         Appendix *B.2 Other References*
>         <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#Informative-References>
>
>   1.
>
>       Update the reference to C14N11, as follows:
>
>           Canonical XML 1.1, J. Boyer and G. Marcy Authors. W3C
>           Candidate Recommendation, 21 June 2007. This is a work in
>           progress. This version is available at
>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/CR-xml-c14n11-20070621.2 May 2008.
>           This version is available at
>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-c14n11-20080502. The
>           latest version of Canonical XML 1.1 is available at
>           http://www.w3.org/TR//xml-c14n11/. 
>
>   2.
>
>       Add a reference to XML Signature (Second Edition) after the
>       reference to [XMLSignature]:
>
>           [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] XML Signature Syntax and
>           Processing, D. Eastlake, J. Reagle, D. Solo, F. Hirsch, and
>           T. Roessler Editors. W3C Recommendation, 10 June 2008. This
>           version of the XML Signature Syntax and Processing
>           Recommendation is
>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xmldsig-core-20080610/. The
>           latest version of XML-Signature Syntax and Processing is
>           available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/. 
>
>       XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link target. Note the removal of
>       the hyphen in the title of the Second Edition.
>
>   3.
>
>       Remove reference to XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>       Working Group, [SecSpecMaintWG], as the text that referenced it
>       has been removed as part of E01:
>
>           [SecSpecMaintWG] XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>           Working Group , See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec. 
>
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> W3C <http://www.w3.org/>
>
>
>   Web Services Policy 1.5 - Primer Errata
>
>
>     21 November 2008
>
> Latest version:
>     http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/7/primer-errata.html 
> Editors:
>     Asir S Vedamuthu, Microsoft Corporation
>     David Orchard, BEA Systems, Inc.
>     Frederick Hirsch, Nokia
>     Maryann Hondo, IBM Corporation
>     Prasad Yendluri, webMethods (A subsidiary of Software AG)
>     Toufic Boubez, Layer 7 Technologies
>     Ümit Yalçinalp, SAP AG.
>
> Last modified: $Date: 2007/09/25 03:43:31 $
>
> Copyright <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright> 
> (©) 2007 W3C <http://www.w3.org/>^® (MIT <http://www.csail.mit.edu/>, 
> ERCIM <http://www.ercim.org/>, Keio <http://www.keio.ac.jp/>), All 
> Rights Reserved. W3C liability 
> <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Legal_Disclaimer>, 
> trademark 
> <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#W3C_Trademarks> and 
> document use <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/copyright-documents> 
> rules apply.
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>
>     Abstract
>
> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 
> - Primer <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/> 
> Working Group Note ; for updates see the latest version of that document.
>
> The errata are numbered, classified as Substantive <#substantive> or 
> Editorial <#editorial>, and listed in reverse chronological order of 
> their date of publication in each category.
>
> Each entry has the following information:
>
>     * A unique entry number
>     * The date it was added to the errata page.
>     * The section referred to.
>     * A description of the problem and correction if applicable.
>       Changes to the text of the spec are indicated thus: deleted
>       text, new text, modified text .
>     * A rationale for making the change (not required for editorial
>       errata).
>
> Changes to the text of the specification are indicated thus: new, 
> added text, modified text, and deleted text.
>
> The Working Group is tracking all comments via Bugzilla 
> <http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/buglist.cgi?query_format=advanced&short_desc_type=allwordssubstr&short_desc=&product=WS-Policy&component=Framework&component=Framework%2BAttachment&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BGuidelines&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BPrimer> 
> and highly prefers to receive comments via this system. If access to 
> Bugzilla is not feasible, you may send your comments to the mailing 
> list public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org 
> <mailto:public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org> mailing list (public archive 
> <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-comments/>). 
> Each Bugzilla entry and email message should contain only one comment. 
> All comments on this specification should be made following the 
> Description for Issues <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/#issues> of 
> the Working Group. It will be very helpful if you include the string 
> [WS-Policy-errata] in the subject line of your comment.
>
>
>     Status of this Document
>
> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 
> - Primer <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/> 
> Working Group Note that were known at the time of publication of this 
> document.
>
>
>     Table of Contents
>
> 1 Substantive Errata <#substantive>
> 2 Editorial Errata <#editorial>
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>
>     1 Substantive Errata
>
> No substantive errata at present
>
>
>     2 Editorial Errata
>
>
>       E01
>
> Date Added: 2008-11-21
>
> Summary: Note on using xml:id should reference Canonical XML 1.1 and 
> XML Signature, Second Edition. References should be updated.
>
>
>         Section *2.10 Referencing Policy Expressions*
>         <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/#Referencing_Policy_Expressions>
>
>   1.
>
>       Replace the text of the Note
>
>           *Note:*
>           Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11
>           <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#C14N11>]
>           is intended to address the issues that occur with Canonical
>           XML 1.0 with regards to xml:id. The W3C XML Security
>           Specifications Maintenance WG has been chartered to address
>           how to integrate Canonical XML 1.1 with XML Security,
>           including XML Signature [SecSpecMaintWG
>           <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#SecSpecMaintWG>]
>           (See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/.) 
>
>       with the following text:
>
>           *Note:*
>           Note that is acceptable to sign a policy expression
>           identified using xml:id with XML SIgnature (Second Edition)
>           [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] and Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11],
>           as these recommendations address issues related to the use
>           of xml:id and xml:base. 
>
>       where XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link to a new reference
>       added to the document.
>
>
>         Appendix *C References*
>         <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/#references>
>
>   1.
>
>       Update the reference to C14N11, as follows:
>
>           Canonical XML 1.1, J. Boyer and G. Marcy Authors. W3C
>           Candidate Recommendation, 21 June 2007. This is a work in
>           progress. This version is available at
>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/CR-xml-c14n11-20070621.2 May 2008.
>           This version is available at
>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-c14n11-20080502. The
>           latest version of Canonical XML 1.1 is available at
>           http://www.w3.org/TR//xml-c14n11/. 
>
>   2.
>
>       Add a reference to XML Signature (Second Edition) after the
>       reference to [C14N11]:
>
>           [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] XML Signature Syntax and
>           Processing, D. Eastlake, J. Reagle, D. Solo, F. Hirsch, and
>           T. Roessler Editors. W3C Recommendation, 10 June 2008. This
>           version of the XML Signature Syntax and Processing
>           Recommendation is
>           http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xmldsig-core-20080610/. The
>           latest version of XML-Signature Syntax and Processing is
>           available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/. 
>
>       XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link target. Note the removal of
>       the hyphen in the title of the Second Edition.
>
>   3.
>
>       Remove reference to XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>       Working Group, [SecSpecMaintWG], as the text that referenced it
>       has been removed as part of E01:
>
>           [SecSpecMaintWG] XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>           Working Group , See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec. 
>
>
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