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RE: Action item 125

From: Paul Cotton <Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com>
Date: Fri, 6 Oct 2006 12:15:28 -0700
To: Felix Sasaki <fsasaki@w3.org>, "Yalcinalp, Umit" <umit.yalcinalp@sap.com>, Maryann Hondo <mhondo@us.ibm.com>
CC: "public-ws-policy@w3.org" <public-ws-policy@w3.org>
Message-ID: <4D66CCFC0B64BA4BBD79D55F6EBC22571BFD553495@NA-EXMSG-C103.redmond.corp.microsoft.com>

Thanks for making the name and short name changes.

I know this is a work in progress but I thought I should note the following comments as early as possible:

1. B. XML Namespaces

I think this section has been copied from another document e.g. Primer.  Many of my editorial comments on the Primer material in the section need to be applied here again.

I expect that not all of these prefixes are required in the Guidelines document.

2. C. References

I think this section has been copied from another document e.g. Primer. Many of my editorial comments on the Primer material in the section need to be applied here again.

Note that NONE of the references listed are actually cited in the text of the document other than in the XML Namespaces section (see above).

The references (and XML Namespaces) should be stripped back to only those that are actually used.

There are actually locations in the document that should be hyperlinked to the References section eg references to MTOM.

/paulc

Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: public-ws-policy-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-policy-
> request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Felix Sasaki
> Sent: October 6, 2006 12:18 AM
> To: Paul Cotton
> Cc: Yalcinalp, Umit; Maryann Hondo; public-ws-policy@w3.org
> Subject: Re: Action item 125
>
>
> I made the changes you proposed, see
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-eds/2006Oct/0026.html
> .
>
> The new URI is
> http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-
> guidelines.html?rev=1.1&content-type=text/html;%20charset=iso-8859-1
>
> tinyurl is http://tinyurl.com/gt2gx
>
> Note that the comments from Frederick at
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2006Oct/0051.html
> are now to be read as about the new location.
>
> Felix
>
>
> Paul Cotton wrote:
> >> Web Services Policy 1.5 - Assertion Authors Guideline for WS-Policy
> >
> > As I said on the call this week I think a much better title is:
> >
> > "Web Services Policy 1.5 - Guidelines for Policy Assertion Authors"
> >
> > especially since it puts the important word "Guidelines" at the
> beginning of the "sub-title".
> >
> > This fits nicely with the other titles of our documents:
> >
> > "Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework"
> > "Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachments"
> > "Web Services Policy 1.5 - Primer"
> >
> > I propose the short name be "ws-policy-guidelines".
> >
> > /paulc
> >
> >
> > Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
> > 17 Eleanor Drive, Ottawa, Ontario K2E 6A3
> > Tel: (613) 225-5445 Fax: (425) 936-7329
> > mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: public-ws-policy-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-policy-
> >> request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Felix Sasaki
> >> Sent: October 5, 2006 2:30 AM
> >> To: public-ws-policy@w3.org
> >> Subject: Action item 125
> >>
> >>
> >> Hi all,
> >>
> >> I did my action item 125 "Felix to Input Guidelines doc in CVS".
> >>
> >> Please have a look at http://tinyurl.com/gxrh3 or
> >> http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-assertion-
> >> guidelines.html?content-type=text/html;charset=utf-8
> >> .
> >>
> >> For the editors: the build.xml is updated respectively.
> >>
> >> Felix
> >
>
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