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RE: Editors' Drafts of WS-Policy Primer and Guidelines documents for Approval as Public WDs

From: Asir Vedamuthu <asirveda@microsoft.com>
Date: Tue, 5 Dec 2006 20:21:56 -0800
Message-ID: <1E0F0378382054439F14D5450650478F0B8F6066@RED-MSG-42.redmond.corp.microsoft.com>
To: Prasad Yendluri <prasad.yendluri@webmethods.com>
CC: <public-ws-policy@w3.org>

(Applying editorial comments from MS review dated Nov 17th [1])

I think these are editorial comments on the Guidelines document [2].


----- Notation Used -----

s/Mary/Marie/ Change most recent occurrence of "Mary" to "Marie". The old string is currently treated as a literal string -- not a regex. 

s/Mary/Marie/G Change all previous and future occurrences of "Mary" to "Marie" (within this document). [3]


----- Editorial comments -----

Section 1. Introduction

a) s/WS-Policy Assertions are XML expressions that communicate the requirements/WS-Policy Assertions communicate the requirements/


Section 2. What is an Assertion?

b) s/There are already many examples in the industry that adhere to this practice/There are already many examples in the industry that adhere to the above practices/


Section 3. Who is involved in authoring Assertions?

c) s/various WS-Policy expressions/various WS-Policy assertions/


Section 3.1.3 Providers

d) s/A provider of WS-Policy Assertions/A provider who expresses capabilities and requirements of a Web service as policies/

e) s/as an XML expression/as a policy expression/

f) s/WS-PolicyFramework/Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework/G

g) s/WS-Policy Attachment/Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment/

h) s/it may also need to conform/the provider may also need to conform/

i) s/conform to requirements of other policy specifications it utilizes ( i.e., WS-SecurityPolicy)/conform to requirements of other policy assertion specifications it utilizes ( i.e., WS-SecurityPolicy)/


[1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2006Nov/att-0115/review-guidelines-doc-dated-11012006.doc 

[2] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-guidelines.html?rev=1.11&content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8  

[3] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/scribe/scribedoc.htm#notes 

Regards,
 
Asir S Vedamuthu
Microsoft Corporation






From: public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Prasad Yendluri
Sent: Monday, December 04, 2006 1:28 PM
To: public-ws-policy@w3.org
Cc: public-ws-policy-eds@w3.org
Subject: Editors' Drafts of WS-Policy Primer and Guidelines documents for Approval as Public WDs

Hi,

The WS-Policy editorial team is pleased to deliver the updated editors' drafts of the 
Web Services Policy Primer [1] and Guidelines [2] documents, for approval as 
Public Working Drafts by the Working Group. 

These editors' drafts incorporated the changes resulting from the Nov 2006, F2F at Bedford, MA. 

Detailed change logs are in the last section of these documents. 
There is also a section in each document that describes substantive changes since the last public working draft.
Note that for guidelines document this would be the first public working draft if approved. 

Pointers [3] and [4] are the diff documents for the Primer and the Guidelines Documents respectively.

[1] http://tinyurl.com/y3mtt4 (OR)
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-primer.html?1.27 

[2] http://tinyurl.com/yx8rnt  (OR)
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-guidelines.html?rev=1.11 

[3]  http://tinyurl.com/vdomu (OR)
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-primer-diff20061109.html?rev=1.2 

[4] http://tinyurl.com/y557lh (OR) 
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-guidelines-diff20061109.html?rev=1.3 

Best regards,

Prasad Yendluri, for
WS-Policy Editorial Team
Received on Wednesday, 6 December 2006 04:22:59 GMT

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