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[Bug 5036] Editorial change proposals for the primer

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Date: Wed, 12 Sep 2007 08:38:46 +0000
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http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5036

           Summary: Editorial change proposals for the primer
           Product: WS-Policy
           Version: FPWD
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Primer
        AssignedTo: fsasaki@w3.org
        ReportedBy: fsasaki@w3.org
         QAContact: public-ws-policy-qa@w3.org


Target: Primer

Description: Editorial change proposals for the primer.

Sec. 2.1:
"Policy is a simple language that has four elements - Policy, All, ExactlyOne
and PolicyReference - and one attribute - wsp:Optional." to
"Policy is a simple language that has four elements - Policy, All, ExactlyOne
and PolicyReference - and two attributes - wsp:Optional and wsp:Ignorable."
Sec. 2.2:
"Child elements of the Policy element are policy assertions." to
"Child elements of the Policy element that are not from the Policy namespace
are policy assertions."
Sec. 2.8:
"both "optional" and "Ignorable" to
both "Optional" and "Ignorable" (upper case for "Optional")
"@wsp:optional=true" to "@wsp:Optional=true"
Sec. 2.10:
"the wsu:Id xml:id and Name attributes." to
"the wsu:Id, xml:id and Name attributes."
"complicated policy scenerios" to "complicated policy scenarios"
"parametrized" to "parameterized"
Sec. 2.12:
"As you have seen, Web Services Policy is a simple language that has four
elements - Policy, All, ExactlyOne and PolicyReference - and one attribute -
wsp:Optional. " to
"As you have seen, Web Services Policy is a simple language that has four
elements - Policy, All, ExactlyOne and PolicyReference - and two attributes -
wsp:Optional and wsp:Ignorable. "
Sec. 3.2:
"These alternatives map to bullets (a) through (d) above." to
"These alternatives map to list items (1) through (4) above."
Sec. 3.3.:
"view policy as an unordered collection" to
"view a policy as an unordered collection"
Sec. 3.4.1:
"how the normal-form of a policy expression relate" to
"how the normal-form of a policy expression relates"

Sec. 4.1:
"The default value for wsp:Optional="false"." to
"The default value for wsp:Optional is "false"."

App. C:
The reference to ws-addr-metadata needs to be updated.

Felix
Received on Wednesday, 12 September 2007 08:38:49 GMT

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