Re: Formal Request: WG Approval of updated Primer and Framework Errata

Thanks Felix

So if we simply wish to update the Primer Note itself, which might be  
simpler and clearer, is that a slow difficult process or simple and  
fast?

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia



On Nov 22, 2008, at 12:34 AM, ext Felix Sasaki wrote:

> Felix Sasaki さんは書きました:
>>
>> Hello Frederick,
>>
>> just FYI:
>>
>> Frederick Hirsch さんは書きました:
>>> Attached are an update to the Framework Errata document, and a new  
>>> Primer Errata document.
>>>
>>> This message is requesting the chairs and WG for formal WG  
>>> approval of these documents and publication.
>>>
>>> Once approved they can be checked into CVS [1]. This will update  
>>> the content referenced from the Framework Recommendation [2] to  
>>> the Framework Errata, making the Framework errata visible.
>>>
>>> The Primer Note does not have a link to the errata. I recommend  
>>> that the WS-Policy WG home page [3] be updated with a link to the  
>>> Errata document for the Primer.
>>
>> From the W3C process you can have an errata document only for  
>> Recommendations. However, if the WG is fine to maintain a document  
>> like what your propose, that's fine. You just have to be aware of  
>> the informal status of that document.
>>
>>>
>>> Separately I ask whether we might also update the note to include  
>>> a link to the primer errata document.
>>
>> I'm not sure if that is OK - to publish a WG Note with a link to an  
>> errata document. I'll check and come back to you.
>
> I checked, it's OK to publish a new version of the Note that links  
> to the errata
> document. Meanwhile, if there are primer errata, you may take the
> opportunity to integrate them.
>
>
> Felix
>
>>
>> Felix
>>
>>>
>>> Thanks to Asir for reviewing drafts of the errata documents.
>>>
>>> regards, Frederick
>>>
>>> Frederick Hirsch
>>> Nokia
>>>
>>> [1] they would both be checked into the directory WWW/2002/ws/ 
>>> policy/7 in /w3ccvs
>>>
>>> [2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/
>>>
>>> [3] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/ , Add errata link next to  
>>> entry in bullet list for primer
>>>
>>>
>>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>
>>> W3C <http://www.w3.org/>
>>>
>>>
>>>  Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework Errata
>>>
>>>
>>>    21 November 2008
>>>
>>> Latest version:
>>>    http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/7/framework-errata.html Editors:
>>>    Asir S Vedamuthu, Microsoft Corporation
>>>    David Orchard, BEA Systems, Inc.
>>>    Frederick Hirsch, Nokia
>>>    Maryann Hondo, IBM Corporation
>>>    Prasad Yendluri, webMethods (A subsidiary of Software AG)
>>>    Toufic Boubez, Layer 7 Technologies
>>>    Ümit Yalçinalp, SAP AG.
>>>
>>> Last modified: $Date: 2007/09/25 03:43:31 $
>>>
>>> Copyright <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr- 
>>> notice#Copyright> (©) 2007 W3C <http://www.w3.org/>^® (MIT <http://www.csail.mit.ed 
>>> u/>, ERCIM <http://www.ercim.org/>, Keio <http://www.keio.ac.jp/ 
>>> >), All Rights Reserved. W3C liability <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Legal_Disclaimer 
>>> >, trademark <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#W3C_Trademarks 
>>> > and document use <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/copyright-documents 
>>> > rules apply.
>>>
>>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>
>>>
>>>    Abstract
>>>
>>> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy  
>>> 1.5 - Framework <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/ 
>>> > specification; for updates see the latest version of that  
>>> document.
>>>
>>> The errata are numbered, classified as Substantive <#substantive>  
>>> or Editorial <#editorial>, and listed in reverse chronological  
>>> order of their date of publication in each category.
>>>
>>> Each entry has the following information:
>>>
>>>    * A unique entry number
>>>    * The date it was added to the errata page.
>>>    * The section referred to.
>>>    * A description of the problem and correction if applicable.
>>>      Changes to the text of the spec are indicated thus: deleted
>>>      text, new text, modified text .
>>>    * A rationale for making the change (not required for editorial
>>>      errata).
>>>
>>> Changes to the text of the specification are indicated thus: new,  
>>> added text, modified text, and deleted text. Substantive  
>>> corrections are proposed by the Web Services Policy Working Group <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/ 
>>> > (part of the Web Services Activity <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/ 
>>> >), which has consensus that they are appropriate; they are not to  
>>> be considered normative until approved by a Call for Review of  
>>> Proposed Corrections <http://www.w3.org/2004/02/Process-20040205/tr.html#cfr-corrections 
>>> > or a Call for Review of an Edited Recommendation <http://www.w3.org/2004/02/Process-20040205/tr.html#cfr-edited 
>>> >.
>>>
>>> The Working Group is tracking all comments via Bugzilla <http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/buglist.cgi?query_format=advanced&short_desc_type=allwordssubstr&short_desc=&product=WS-Policy&component=Framework&component=Framework%2BAttachment&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BGuidelines&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BPrimer 
>>> > and highly prefers to receive comments via this system. If  
>>> access to Bugzilla is not feasible, you may send your comments to  
>>> the mailing list public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org <mailto:public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org 
>>> > mailing list (public archive <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-comments/ 
>>> >). Each Bugzilla entry and email message should contain only one  
>>> comment. All comments on this specification should be made  
>>> following the Description for Issues <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/#issues 
>>> > of the Working Group. It will be very helpful if you include the  
>>> string [WS-Policy-errata] in the subject line of your comment.
>>>
>>>
>>>    Status of this Document
>>>
>>> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy  
>>> 1.5 - Framework <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/ 
>>> > specification; that were known at the time of publication of  
>>> this document.
>>>
>>> None of the errata reported in this document have been approved by  
>>> a Call for Review of Proposed Corrections or a Call for Review of  
>>> an Edited Recommendation. As a consequence, they must not be  
>>> considered to be normative.
>>>
>>>
>>>    Table of Contents
>>>
>>> 1 Substantive Errata <#substantive>
>>> 2 Editorial Errata <#editorial>
>>>
>>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>
>>>
>>>    1 Substantive Errata
>>>
>>> No substantive errata at present
>>>
>>>
>>>    2 Editorial Errata
>>>
>>>
>>>      E01
>>>
>>> Date Added: 2008-11-21
>>>
>>> Summary: Note on using xml:id should reference Canonical XML 1.1  
>>> and XML Signature, Second Edition. References should be updated.
>>>
>>>
>>>        Section *4.2, Policy Identification*
>>>        <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#Policy_Identification 
>>> >
>>>
>>>  1.
>>>
>>>      Replace the text of the second Note
>>>
>>>          *Note:*
>>>          Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11
>>>          <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#C14N11>]
>>>          is intended to address the issues that occur with Canonical
>>>          XML 1.0 with regards to xml:id. The W3C XML Security
>>>          Specifications Maintenance WG has been chartered to address
>>>          how to integrate Canonical XML 1.1 with XML Security,
>>>          including XML Signature [SecSpecMaintWG
>>>          <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#SecSpecMaintWG 
>>> >]
>>>          (See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/.)
>>>      with the following text:
>>>
>>>          *Note:*
>>>          Note that is acceptable to sign a policy expression
>>>          identified using xml:id with XML SIgnature (Second Edition)
>>>          [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] and Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11],
>>>          as these recommendations address issues related to the use
>>>          of xml:id and xml:base.
>>>      where XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link to a new reference
>>>      added to the document.
>>>
>>>
>>>        Appendix *B.2 Other References*
>>>        <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#Informative-References 
>>> >
>>>
>>>  1.
>>>
>>>      Update the reference to C14N11, as follows:
>>>
>>>          Canonical XML 1.1, J. Boyer and G. Marcy Authors. W3C
>>>          Candidate Recommendation, 21 June 2007. This is a work in
>>>          progress. This version is available at
>>>          http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/CR-xml-c14n11-20070621.2 May  
>>> 2008.
>>>          This version is available at
>>>          http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-c14n11-20080502. The
>>>          latest version of Canonical XML 1.1 is available at
>>>          http://www.w3.org/TR//xml-c14n11/.
>>>  2.
>>>
>>>      Add a reference to XML Signature (Second Edition) after the
>>>      reference to [XMLSignature]:
>>>
>>>          [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] XML Signature Syntax and
>>>          Processing, D. Eastlake, J. Reagle, D. Solo, F. Hirsch, and
>>>          T. Roessler Editors. W3C Recommendation, 10 June 2008. This
>>>          version of the XML Signature Syntax and Processing
>>>          Recommendation is
>>>          http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xmldsig-core-20080610/. The
>>>          latest version of XML-Signature Syntax and Processing is
>>>          available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/.
>>>      XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link target. Note the removal of
>>>      the hyphen in the title of the Second Edition.
>>>
>>>  3.
>>>
>>>      Remove reference to XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>>>      Working Group, [SecSpecMaintWG], as the text that referenced it
>>>      has been removed as part of E01:
>>>
>>>          [SecSpecMaintWG] XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>>>          Working Group , See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec.
>>>
>>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>
>>> W3C <http://www.w3.org/>
>>>
>>>
>>>  Web Services Policy 1.5 - Primer Errata
>>>
>>>
>>>    21 November 2008
>>>
>>> Latest version:
>>>    http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/7/primer-errata.html Editors:
>>>    Asir S Vedamuthu, Microsoft Corporation
>>>    David Orchard, BEA Systems, Inc.
>>>    Frederick Hirsch, Nokia
>>>    Maryann Hondo, IBM Corporation
>>>    Prasad Yendluri, webMethods (A subsidiary of Software AG)
>>>    Toufic Boubez, Layer 7 Technologies
>>>    Ümit Yalçinalp, SAP AG.
>>>
>>> Last modified: $Date: 2007/09/25 03:43:31 $
>>>
>>> Copyright <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr- 
>>> notice#Copyright> (©) 2007 W3C <http://www.w3.org/>^® (MIT <http://www.csail.mit.ed 
>>> u/>, ERCIM <http://www.ercim.org/>, Keio <http://www.keio.ac.jp/ 
>>> >), All Rights Reserved. W3C liability <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Legal_Disclaimer 
>>> >, trademark <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#W3C_Trademarks 
>>> > and document use <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/copyright-documents 
>>> > rules apply.
>>>
>>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>
>>>
>>>    Abstract
>>>
>>> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy  
>>> 1.5 - Primer <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/ 
>>> > Working Group Note ; for updates see the latest version of that  
>>> document.
>>>
>>> The errata are numbered, classified as Substantive <#substantive>  
>>> or Editorial <#editorial>, and listed in reverse chronological  
>>> order of their date of publication in each category.
>>>
>>> Each entry has the following information:
>>>
>>>    * A unique entry number
>>>    * The date it was added to the errata page.
>>>    * The section referred to.
>>>    * A description of the problem and correction if applicable.
>>>      Changes to the text of the spec are indicated thus: deleted
>>>      text, new text, modified text .
>>>    * A rationale for making the change (not required for editorial
>>>      errata).
>>>
>>> Changes to the text of the specification are indicated thus: new,  
>>> added text, modified text, and deleted text.
>>>
>>> The Working Group is tracking all comments via Bugzilla <http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/buglist.cgi?query_format=advanced&short_desc_type=allwordssubstr&short_desc=&product=WS-Policy&component=Framework&component=Framework%2BAttachment&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BGuidelines&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BPrimer 
>>> > and highly prefers to receive comments via this system. If  
>>> access to Bugzilla is not feasible, you may send your comments to  
>>> the mailing list public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org <mailto:public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org 
>>> > mailing list (public archive <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-comments/ 
>>> >). Each Bugzilla entry and email message should contain only one  
>>> comment. All comments on this specification should be made  
>>> following the Description for Issues <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/#issues 
>>> > of the Working Group. It will be very helpful if you include the  
>>> string [WS-Policy-errata] in the subject line of your comment.
>>>
>>>
>>>    Status of this Document
>>>
>>> This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy  
>>> 1.5 - Primer <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/ 
>>> > Working Group Note that were known at the time of publication of  
>>> this document.
>>>
>>>
>>>    Table of Contents
>>>
>>> 1 Substantive Errata <#substantive>
>>> 2 Editorial Errata <#editorial>
>>>
>>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>
>>>
>>>    1 Substantive Errata
>>>
>>> No substantive errata at present
>>>
>>>
>>>    2 Editorial Errata
>>>
>>>
>>>      E01
>>>
>>> Date Added: 2008-11-21
>>>
>>> Summary: Note on using xml:id should reference Canonical XML 1.1  
>>> and XML Signature, Second Edition. References should be updated.
>>>
>>>
>>>        Section *2.10 Referencing Policy Expressions*
>>>        <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/#Referencing_Policy_Expressions 
>>> >
>>>
>>>  1.
>>>
>>>      Replace the text of the Note
>>>
>>>          *Note:*
>>>          Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11
>>>          <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#C14N11>]
>>>          is intended to address the issues that occur with Canonical
>>>          XML 1.0 with regards to xml:id. The W3C XML Security
>>>          Specifications Maintenance WG has been chartered to address
>>>          how to integrate Canonical XML 1.1 with XML Security,
>>>          including XML Signature [SecSpecMaintWG
>>>          <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#SecSpecMaintWG 
>>> >]
>>>          (See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/.)
>>>      with the following text:
>>>
>>>          *Note:*
>>>          Note that is acceptable to sign a policy expression
>>>          identified using xml:id with XML SIgnature (Second Edition)
>>>          [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] and Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11],
>>>          as these recommendations address issues related to the use
>>>          of xml:id and xml:base.
>>>      where XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link to a new reference
>>>      added to the document.
>>>
>>>
>>>        Appendix *C References*
>>>        <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/#references 
>>> >
>>>
>>>  1.
>>>
>>>      Update the reference to C14N11, as follows:
>>>
>>>          Canonical XML 1.1, J. Boyer and G. Marcy Authors. W3C
>>>          Candidate Recommendation, 21 June 2007. This is a work in
>>>          progress. This version is available at
>>>          http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/CR-xml-c14n11-20070621.2 May  
>>> 2008.
>>>          This version is available at
>>>          http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-c14n11-20080502. The
>>>          latest version of Canonical XML 1.1 is available at
>>>          http://www.w3.org/TR//xml-c14n11/.
>>>  2.
>>>
>>>      Add a reference to XML Signature (Second Edition) after the
>>>      reference to [C14N11]:
>>>
>>>          [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] XML Signature Syntax and
>>>          Processing, D. Eastlake, J. Reagle, D. Solo, F. Hirsch, and
>>>          T. Roessler Editors. W3C Recommendation, 10 June 2008. This
>>>          version of the XML Signature Syntax and Processing
>>>          Recommendation is
>>>          http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xmldsig-core-20080610/. The
>>>          latest version of XML-Signature Syntax and Processing is
>>>          available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/.
>>>      XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link target. Note the removal of
>>>      the hyphen in the title of the Second Edition.
>>>
>>>  3.
>>>
>>>      Remove reference to XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>>>      Working Group, [SecSpecMaintWG], as the text that referenced it
>>>      has been removed as part of E01:
>>>
>>>          [SecSpecMaintWG] XML Security Specifications Maintenance
>>>          Working Group , See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec.
>>>
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