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     on public-ws-policy@w3.org</a> are also gratefully
     acknowledged.
   </p></div><div class="div1">
-<h2><a name="change-description" id="change-description"></a>E. Changes in this Version of the Document (Non-Normative)</h2><p>A list of substantive changes since the Working Draft dated 30 March, 
+<h2><a name="change-description" id="change-description"></a>E. Changes in this Version of the Document (Non-Normative)</h2><p>A list of substantive (and major editorial) changes since the Working Draft dated 30 March, 
 			2007 is below:</p><ul><li><p>Reformatted the document to follow the model of the
-				   	<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/webarch/#uri-benefits">WWW Architecture Document.</a>
+				   	<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/webarch/">Architecture of the World Wide Web, Volume One 
+				   	</a> (issue <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3989">3989</a>).
 					</p></li><li><p>Created a consolidated list of Best Practices at the beginning of the document 
-					(<a href="#best-practices-list"><b>2. List of Best Practice Statements</b></a>).
+						(<a href="#best-practices-list"><b>2. List of Best Practice Statements</b></a>) (issue <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3989">3989</a>).
 					</p></li><li><p>Incorporated the Best Practices from 
-						<a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2007Mar/att-0069/good-practices-4-assertion-authors-03-05-2007.pdf">IBM/Microsoft Contibution.</a>
-					</p></li><li><p>Made editorial changes to align with the OASIS WS-SecurityPolicy specification.</p></li><li><p>Made editorial changes to align with the W3C WS-Addressing 1.0 Metadata specification.</p></li><li><p>Updated Section 5.5 for 4661/4662.</p></li><li><p>Updated Section 5.3.2, 5.6 for 4661/4662.</p></li></ul></div><div class="div1">
+						<a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2007Mar/att-0069/good-practices-4-assertion-authors-03-05-2007.pdf">IBM and Microsoft 
+							Contibution</a> (issue <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3989">3989</a>).
+					</p></li><li><p>Made editorial changes to align with the OASIS WS-SecurityPolicy specification.</p></li><li><p>Made editorial changes to align with the W3C WS-Addressing 1.0 Metadata specification.</p></li><li><p>Reorganized the guidelines on XML Information Set representation.</p></li><li><p>Dropped <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-ws-policy-guidelines-20070330/#best-practices-attachment">Section 
+						6 Applying Best Practices for Policy Attachment</a> 
+						(issue <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3978">3978</a>).</p></li><li><p>Dropped <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-ws-policy-guidelines-20070330/#scenario">Section 
+						7 Scenario and a worked example</a> 
+						(issue issue <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3988">3988</a>).</p></li></ul></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="change-log" id="change-log"></a>F. Web Services Policy 1.5 - Guidelines for Policy Assertion Authors Change Log (Non-Normative)</h2><a name="ws-policy-primer-changelog-table"></a><table border="1"><tbody><tr><th rowspan="1" colspan="1">Date</th><th rowspan="1" colspan="1">Author</th><th rowspan="1" colspan="1">Description</th></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20060829</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">UY</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Created first draft based on agreed outline and content</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20061013</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">UY</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Editorial fixes (suggested by Frederick), fixed references, bibl items, fixed dangling pointers, created eds to do</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20061018</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">MH</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Editorial fixes for readability, added example for Encrypted parts</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20061030</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">UY</td><td rospan="1" colspan="1">Fixes for Paul Cotton's editorial comments (20061020)</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20061031</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">UY</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Fixes for Frederick's editorial comments (20061025)</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20061031</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">UY</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Optionality discussion feedback integration</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20061115</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">MH</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">First attempt at restructuring to include primer content</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20061120</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">MH</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Restructure to address action items 64,77, which refer to bugzilla 3705 and F2F RESOLUTION 3792 </td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20061127</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">ASV</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Updated the list of editors. Added 
 							<a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-eds/2006Nov/0033.html">Frederick</a> and 
 							<a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-eds/2006Nov/0054.html">Umit</a> to the list of editors.
@@ -1608,9 +1614,9 @@
 							for issue <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3988">3988</a>. 
 							Editors' action: 
 							<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/338">338</a>, 
-							drop <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-ws-policy-guidelines-20070330/">Section 
+							drop <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-ws-policy-guidelines-20070330/#scenario">Section 
 								7 Scenario and a worked example</a></td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20070718</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">ASV</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Implemented the resolution 
-							for issue <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3988">3978</a>. 
+							for issue <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3978">3978</a>. 
 							Editors' action: 
 							<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/339">339</a>, 
 							drop <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-ws-policy-guidelines-20070330/#best-practices-attachment">Section 
@@ -1643,7 +1649,8 @@
 							Editors' action: 
 							<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/342">342</a>.
 						</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20070727</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">ASV</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Implemented the resolution for issue 
-							<a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4660">4695</a>. 
+							<a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4695">4695</a>. 
 							Editors' action: 
 							<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/347">347</a>.
+						</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20070727</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">ASV</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Updated Section <a href="#change-description"><b>E. Changes in this Version of the Document</b></a>.
 						</td></tr></tbody></table><br></div></div></body></html>
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@@ -1876,32 +1876,41 @@
 			</blist>
 		</div1>&acknowledgements; <inform-div1 id="change-description">
 			<head>Changes in this Version of the Document</head>
-			<p>A list of substantive changes since the Working Draft dated 30 March, 
+			<p>A list of substantive (and major editorial) changes since the Working Draft dated 30 March, 
 			2007 is below:</p>
 			<ulist>
 				<item>
 				   <p>Reformatted the document to follow the model of the
-				   	<loc href="http://www.w3.org/TR/webarch/#uri-benefits">WWW Architecture Document.</loc>
+				   	<loc href="http://www.w3.org/TR/webarch/">Architecture of the World Wide Web, Volume One 
+				   	</loc> (issue <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3989">3989</loc>).
 					</p>
 				</item>
 				<item>
 					<p>Created a consolidated list of Best Practices at the beginning of the document 
-					(<specref ref="best-practices-list"/>).
+						(<specref ref="best-practices-list"/>) (issue <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3989">3989</loc>).
 					</p>
 				</item>
 				<item>
 					<p>Incorporated the Best Practices from 
-						<loc href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2007Mar/att-0069/good-practices-4-assertion-authors-03-05-2007.pdf">IBM/Microsoft Contibution.</loc>
+						<loc href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2007Mar/att-0069/good-practices-4-assertion-authors-03-05-2007.pdf">IBM and Microsoft 
+							Contibution</loc> (issue <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3989">3989</loc>).
 					</p>
 				</item>
 				<item><p>Made editorial changes to align with the OASIS WS-SecurityPolicy specification.</p></item>
 				<item><p>Made editorial changes to align with the W3C WS-Addressing 1.0 Metadata specification.</p></item>
 								<item>
-<p>Updated Section 5.5 for 4661/4662.</p>
-</item>
-								<item>
-<p>Updated Section 5.3.2, 5.6 for 4661/4662.</p>
+<p>Reorganized the guidelines on XML Information Set representation.</p>
 </item>
+				<item>
+					<p>Dropped <loc href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-ws-policy-guidelines-20070330/#best-practices-attachment">Section 
+						6 Applying Best Practices for Policy Attachment</loc> 
+						(issue <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3978">3978</loc>).</p>
+				</item>
+				<item>
+					<p>Dropped <loc href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-ws-policy-guidelines-20070330/#scenario">Section 
+						7 Scenario and a worked example</loc> 
+						(issue issue <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3988">3988</loc>).</p>
+				</item>
 			</ulist>
 		</inform-div1>
 		<inform-div1 id="change-log">
@@ -2572,14 +2581,14 @@
 							for issue <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3988">3988</loc>. 
 							Editors' action: 
 							<loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/338">338</loc>, 
-							drop <loc href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-ws-policy-guidelines-20070330/">Section 
+							drop <loc href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-ws-policy-guidelines-20070330/#scenario">Section 
 								7 Scenario and a worked example</loc></td>
 					</tr> 
 					<tr>
 						<td>20070718</td>
 						<td>ASV</td>
 						<td>Implemented the resolution 
-							for issue <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3988">3978</loc>. 
+							for issue <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3978">3978</loc>. 
 							Editors' action: 
 							<loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/339">339</loc>, 
 							drop <loc href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-ws-policy-guidelines-20070330/#best-practices-attachment">Section 
@@ -2658,10 +2667,16 @@
 						<td>20070727</td>
 						<td>ASV</td>
 						<td>Implemented the resolution for issue 
-							<loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4660">4695</loc>. 
+							<loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4695">4695</loc>. 
 							Editors' action: 
 							<loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/347">347</loc>.
 						</td>
+					</tr>
+					<tr>
+						<td>20070727</td>
+						<td>ASV</td>
+						<td>Updated Section <specref ref="change-description"/>.
+						</td>
 					</tr> 
 				</tbody>
 			</table>

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