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From: Frederick Hirsch via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 31 Jan 2007 20:24:42 +0000
To: public-ws-policy-eds@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1HCM0Y-0003ie-Ad@lionel-hutz.w3.org>

Update of /sources/public/2006/ws/policy
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv14249

Modified Files:
	ws-policy-guidelines.xml 
Log Message:
Implement amendment in message 217 with minor editorial modifications for readability of entire sentence. This should complete editors action 152.


Index: ws-policy-guidelines.xml
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RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-guidelines.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.33
retrieving revision 1.34
diff -u -d -r1.33 -r1.34
--- ws-policy-guidelines.xml	31 Jan 2007 20:15:13 -0000	1.33
+++ ws-policy-guidelines.xml	31 Jan 2007 20:24:40 -0000	1.34
@@ -1175,7 +1175,7 @@
 			</div2>
 		<div2 id="interrelated-domains">
 			<head>Interrelated domains</head>
-			<p>Domain authors need to be clear about how assertions defined in  
+			<p>Assertion authors need to be clear about how assertions defined in  
 				their domain may fit with assertions for interrelated domains. A  
 				classic example of such an interrelated domain is security, because  
 				security tends to
@@ -1185,9 +1185,9 @@
 				related to the interrelated security domain [<bibref ref="WS-SecurityPolicy"/>] in  
 				Web Services Reliable Messaging Policy
 				Assertions [<bibref ref="WS-RM-Policy"/>]. </p>
-			<p>Care should be taken to not duplicate existing  
-				assertions and also to make sure that new assertions are consistent  
-				with pre-existing assertions, when adding assertions related to an  
+			<p>Assertion authors should not duplicate existing  
+				assertions and should also make sure that when adding assertions those new assertions are consistent  
+				with pre-existing assertions of any  
 				interrelated domain. </p>
 		</div2>
 	</div1>
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