2006/ws/policy ws-policy-framework.xml,1.53,1.54

Update of /sources/public/2006/ws/policy
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv15368

Modified Files:
	ws-policy-framework.xml 
Log Message:
 Implemented the editorial action http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/02 for use of term "domain authors"


Index: ws-policy-framework.xml
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RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.53
retrieving revision 1.54
diff -u -d -r1.53 -r1.54
--- ws-policy-framework.xml	26 Sep 2006 07:50:17 -0000	1.53
+++ ws-policy-framework.xml	27 Sep 2006 12:01:19 -0000	1.54
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@
 	    security, transactions) semantics and are expected to be
 	    defined in separate, domain-specific specifications.</p>
 
-	    <p>Assertions are typed by the domain authors
+	    <p>Assertions are typed by the authors
 	    that define them. The <termref
 	    def='policy_assertion_type'>policy assertion
 	    type</termref> is identified only by the XML Infoset <emph
@@ -365,12 +365,12 @@
 	    interpreted independent of their <termref
 	    def='policy_subject'>policy subjects</termref>.</p>
 
-	    <p>Domain authors <rfc2119>MAY</rfc2119> define that an assertion contains a
+	    <p>Authors <rfc2119>MAY</rfc2119> define that an assertion contains a
 	    <termref def='policy_expression'>policy
 	        expression</termref> (as defined in <specref ref="rPolicy_Expression"/>) as one of its <emph
-	    role="infoset-property">children</emph>.  <termref def="nested_policy_expression">Nested policy expression(s)</termref> are used by domain authors to further
+	    role="infoset-property">children</emph>.  <termref def="nested_policy_expression">Nested policy expression(s)</termref> are used by authors to further
 	    qualify one or more specific aspects of the original
-	    assertion. For example, security policy domain authors may
+	    assertion. For example, security policy authors may
 	    define an assertion describing a set of security
 	    algorithms to qualify the specific behavior of a security
 	    binding assertion. </p>
@@ -389,10 +389,10 @@
 	    item to indicate how long an endpoint will wait before
 	    sending an acknowledgement. </p>
 
-	    <p>Domain authors should be cognizant of the processing
+	    <p>Authors should be cognizant of the processing
 	    requirements when defining complex assertions containing
 	    <termref def="policy_assertion_parameter">policy assertion parameters</termref> or <termref def="nested_policy_expression">nested policy
-	    expressions</termref>. Specifically, domain authors are encouraged
+	    expressions</termref>. Specifically, authors are encouraged
 	    to consider when the identity of the root Element
 	    Information Item alone is enough to convey the requirement
 	    or capability.</p>
@@ -424,7 +424,7 @@
 	    thus aspects such as the order in which behaviors
 	    (indicated by assertions) are applied to a <termref def='policy_subject'>subject</termref> are
 	        beyond the scope of this specification.
-	        However, domain authors can write assertions that control the order in which behaviours are applied.</p>
+	        However, authors can write assertions that control the order in which behaviours are applied.</p>
 
 	    <p>A policy alternative <rfc2119>MAY</rfc2119> contain multiple assertions of
 	    the same type. Mechanisms for determining the aggregate
@@ -1950,6 +1950,15 @@
                             <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3549">3549</loc>.                	
                         </td>
                     </tr>
+                     <tr>
+                        <td>20060928</td>
+                        <td>MH</td>
+                        <td>Completed action item:
+                            <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/02">resolution</loc> 
+                            for issue 
+                            <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3706">3706</loc> changing "domain authors" to "authors".                	
+                        </td>
+                    </tr>
                 </tbody>
             </table>
         </inform-div1>

Received on Wednesday, 27 September 2006 12:01:47 UTC