2002/ws/desc/wsdl20 wsdl20-additional-meps.xml,1.4,1.5

Update of /sources/public/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv7389

Modified Files:
	wsdl20-additional-meps.xml 
Log Message:
Editorial corrections per jjm, tj, jm

Index: wsdl20-additional-meps.xml
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RCS file: /sources/public/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-additional-meps.xml,v
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*** wsdl20-additional-meps.xml	7 Nov 2006 19:01:02 -0000	1.4
--- wsdl20-additional-meps.xml	26 Feb 2007 17:57:34 -0000	1.5
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*** 5,13 ****
      "-//W3C//DTD Specification V2.2+WSDL//EN"
      "xmlspec.dtd" [
- <!ENTITY component-table SYSTEM "adjuncts-component-table.xml">
- <!ENTITY component-assertion-table SYSTEM "adjuncts-component-assertion-table.xml">
- <!ENTITY document-assertion-table SYSTEM "adjuncts-document-assertion-table.xml">
- <!ENTITY exchange-assertion-table SYSTEM "adjuncts-exchange-assertion-table.xml">
- <!ENTITY assertion-summary SYSTEM "adjuncts-assertion-summary.xml">
  <!ENTITY extra-ack "">
  <!ENTITY % entities SYSTEM "entities.dtd" >
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  	<!-- Should move the following entitites to ENTITY.dtd -->
  	<!ENTITY prefix "wsdl20-additional-meps">
! 	<!ENTITY additionalmeps.title "WSDL 2.0 Additional MEPs">
  	<!ENTITY additionalmeps.prefix "wsdl20-additional-meps">
  	<!ENTITY w3c-designation-additionalmeps "&additionalmeps.prefix;.html">
--- 10,14 ----
  	<!-- Should move the following entitites to ENTITY.dtd -->
  	<!ENTITY prefix "wsdl20-additional-meps">
! 	<!ENTITY additionalmeps.title "Web Services Description Language (WSDL) Version 2.0: Additional MEPs">
  	<!ENTITY additionalmeps.prefix "wsdl20-additional-meps">
  	<!ENTITY w3c-designation-additionalmeps "&additionalmeps.prefix;.html">
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*** 61,70 ****
  	&additionalmeps.title; specifies predefined extensions for use in WSDL 2.0:
        </p>
!       <ulist>
! 	<item><p>Message exchange patterns</p></item>
!       </ulist>
        <p>
  	This
! 	specification depends on WSDL Version 2.0 <bibref ref="WSDL-PART2"/>.
        </p>
      </abstract>
--- 56,63 ----
  	&additionalmeps.title; specifies predefined extensions for use in WSDL 2.0:
        </p>
!       <p>Message exchange patterns</p>
        <p>
  	This
! 	specification depends on WSDL Version 2.0 <bibref ref="WSDL-PART1" /> <bibref ref="WSDL-PART2"/>.
        </p>
      </abstract>
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  communication. This document defines extensions for the WSDL 2.0
        language:</p>
!       <ulist>
! 	<item><p>Message exchange patterns: <specref ref='meps'/></p></item>
!       </ulist>
  
-       <p> WSDL 2.0 Primer <bibref ref="WSDL-PART0"/> is a non-normative
- document intended to provide an easily understandable tutorial on the
- features of the WSDL Version 2.0 specifications.  </p>
-       <p> The Core Language <bibref ref="WSDL-PART1"/> of the WSDL 2.0
- specification describes the core elements of the WSDL language. </p>
-       <!-- +++++++++ -->
        <div2 id="notcon">
          <head>Notational Conventions</head>
--- 85,90 ----
  communication. This document defines extensions for the WSDL 2.0
        language:</p>
!       <p>Message exchange patterns: <specref ref='meps'/></p>
  
        <div2 id="notcon">
          <head>Notational Conventions</head>
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*** 164,217 ****
  
  <p>
! Web Services Description Language (WSDL) message exchange patterns (hereafter simply
! 'patterns') define the sequence and cardinality of abstract messages listed in 
! an operation.  Message exchange patterns also define which other nodes send 
! messages to, and receive messages from, the service implementing the operation.
! </p>
! 
! <p>
! A <emph>node</emph> is an agent (<xspecref href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/NOTE-ws-arch-20040211/#agent">section 2.3.2.2
! Agent of the Web Services Architecture</xspecref> <bibref ref="wsarch" />) that can transmit and/or receive message(s) 
! described in WSDL description(s) and process them.
! </p>
! <note>
!     <p><assert class="exchange" id="NodeIdentity-2200000" required="false">A
!         node MAY be accessible via more than one physical address or transport.</assert></p>
! </note>
! 
! <p>
! WSDL message exchange patterns describe the interaction at the abstract 
! (interface) level, which may be distinct from the pattern used by the 
! underlying protocol binding.</p>
! 
! <p>
! By design, WSDL message exchange patterns abstract out specific message types.
! Patterns identify placeholders for messages, and placeholders are
! associated with specific message types by the operation using the
! pattern. 
! </p>
! 
! <p>
! Unless explicitly stated otherwise, WSDL message exchange patterns also
! abstract out binding-specific information such as timing between
! messages, whether the pattern is synchronous or asynchronous, and
! whether the messages are sent over a single or multiple channels.
! </p>
! 
! <p>
! Like interfaces and operations, WSDL message exchange patterns do not
! exhaustively describe the set of messages exchanged between a service
! and other nodes; <assert class="exchange" id="MEPDescriptiveness-2200001"
! required="false">by some prior agreement, another node and/or the
! service MAY send other messages (to each other or to other nodes) that
! are not described by the pattern.</assert> For instance, even though a pattern
! may define a single message sent from a service to one other node, the
! Web service may multicast that message to other nodes.
! </p>
! 
! <p>
! To maximize reuse, WSDL message exchange patterns identify a minimal contract
! between other parties and Web services, and contain only information
! that is relevant to both the Web service and another party.
  </p>
  
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  <p>
! Web Services Description Language (WSDL) <bibref ref="WSDL-PART2" /> defines several
! message exchange patterns (hereafter simply 'patterns'), as well as rules for
! defining additional patterns.
  </p>
  
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--- 160,170 ----
  contents of this document.</p>
  
+ <p>These patterns were originally intended for inclusion in <emph>WSDL Version
+ 	2.0 Part 2: Adjunct</emph> <bibref ref="WSDL-PART2" />.  The Working Group
+ 	ultimately decided that including only those patterns which were referenced
+ 	by the bindings defined in that specification was clearer for implementors
+ 	and users, and resolved to publish these remaining patterns separately as
+ 	a Note.</p>
+ 
  <div2 id="fault-rules">
  <head>Fault Propagation Rules</head>
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              2005. Available at http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3987.txt.
  	  </bibl>
-         <bibl id="wsarch" key="Web Services Architecture" href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/NOTE-ws-arch-20040211/">
-         	<titleref>Web Services Architecture</titleref>,
-         	David Booth, Hugo Haas, Francis McCabe, Eric Newcomer, Michael Champion, Chris Ferris, David Orchard, Editors.
-         	World Wide Web Consortium,
-         	11 February 2004.
- 		This version of the
- 		"Web Services Architecture" Working Group Note is
- 	    http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/NOTE-ws-arch-20040211/. The <loc href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-arch/">latest version of
- 	    "Web Services Architecture"</loc> is available at
- 	    http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-arch/.
-         </bibl>
            <bibl key="WSDL 2.0 Core Language" href="&w3c-designation-part1;" id="WSDL-PART1">
              <titleref>&part1.title;</titleref>, R. Chinnici, M. Gudgin, J-J. Moreau,
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              <tr>
+                 <td>20070226</td>
+                 <td>aal</td>
+                 <td>Editorial fixes per feedback from jjm, jm, and tj.</td>
+             </tr>
+             <tr>
                  <td>20061107</td>
                  <td>aal</td>

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