Re: Issue 3843: Minor updates (#2)

• From: Monica J. Martin <Monica.Martin@Sun.COM>
• Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2007 11:13:45 -0800
• To: Gary Brown <gary@pi4tech.com>
• Cc: WS-Choreography List <public-ws-chor@w3.org>
• Message-id: <45D20DE9.9040703@sun.com>

Add: Update syntax in Section 6.2.3. Thanks.

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Gary,
Reviewing the proposal [1] for Issue 3843 [2], minor corrections are 
suggested for Section 5.7 Choreography Lifeline:

   3rd para:
   From
   "A choreography is initiated, establishing a collaboration when an
   interaction, explicitly marked as an /choreography initiator/, is
   performed"

   To
   "A choreography session is initiated, establishing a new collaboration
   between participants, upon the occurrence of the first interaction in
   the flow which BEGINS at the root choreography."

   4th para:
   From
   "Two or more interactions MAY be marked as choreography initiators,
   indicating alternatives for establishing a collaboration"
   To
   "Two or more interactions MAY [delete "be"] cause a choreography
   session to be
   initiated, if they represent alternate flow paths from the root
   choreography."

Thanks.

[1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-chor/2006Dec/0021.html
[2] http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3843

Received on Tuesday, 13 February 2007 19:13:59 UTC