RE: Issue 3843 proposed changes

In the change to Section 5.7 Choreography Lifeline 3rd para:

Typo  change 'beings' to 'begins'

Best Regards     Tony
A M Fletcher
 


-----Original Message-----
From: public-ws-chor-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-chor-request@w3.org]
On Behalf Of Gary Brown
Sent: 18 December 2006 17:25
To: WS-Choreography List
Subject: Issue 3843 proposed changes



Additional proposed changes for

	Issue: Redundant 'initiate' flag on interaction
			http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3843

Section 5.7 Choreography Lifeline

3rd para:
From
"A choreography is initiated, establishing a collaboration when an 
interaction, explicitly marked as an /choreography initiator/, is performed"

To
"A choreography session is initiated, establishing a new collaboration 
between participants, upon the occurrence of the first interaction in 
the flow which beings at the root choreography."


4th para:
From
"Two or more interactions MAY be marked as choreography initiators, 
indicating alternatives for establishing a collaboration"
To
"Two or more interactions MAY be cause a choreography session to be 
initiated, if they represent alternate flow paths from the root 
choreography."

5th para:
Delete
"A choreography initiator interaction MAY be defined within a root 
choreography or within an enclosed choreography. In either case the 
collaboration is established when the first choreography initiator 
interaction is performed."


This caters for all uses of the term "initiator" in the current 
specification.

Regards
Gary

Received on Tuesday, 19 December 2006 22:53:59 UTC