RE: Issue 3843 proposed changes

Good catch, Martin. Beyond that, I support the change.

-Charlton.
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On Monday, December 18, 2006, at 06:39PM, "Martin Chapman" <martin.chapman@oracle.com> wrote:
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>Minor typo in 4th para proposal "...interactions MAY be cause a choreography..."
>Otherwise looks good to me.
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>Martin.
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>>-----Original Message-----
>>From: public-ws-chor-request@w3.org 
>>[mailto:public-ws-chor-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Gary Brown
>>Sent: Monday, December 18, 2006 5:25 PM
>>To: WS-Choreography List
>>Subject: Issue 3843 proposed changes
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>>Additional proposed changes for
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>>	Issue: Redundant 'initiate' flag on interaction
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>>http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3843
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>>Section 5.7 Choreography Lifeline
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>>3rd para:
>>From
>>"A choreography is initiated, establishing a collaboration when an 
>>interaction, explicitly marked as an /choreography initiator/, 
>>is performed"
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>>To
>>"A choreography session is initiated, establishing a new collaboration 
>>between participants, upon the occurrence of the first interaction in 
>>the flow which beings at the root choreography."
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>>4th para:
>>From
>>"Two or more interactions MAY be marked as choreography initiators, 
>>indicating alternatives for establishing a collaboration"
>>To
>>"Two or more interactions MAY be cause a choreography session to be 
>>initiated, if they represent alternate flow paths from the root 
>>choreography."
>>
>>5th para:
>>Delete
>>"A choreography initiator interaction MAY be defined within a root 
>>choreography or within an enclosed choreography. In either case the 
>>collaboration is established when the first choreography initiator 
>>interaction is performed."
>>
>>
>>This caters for all uses of the term "initiator" in the current 
>>specification.
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>>Regards
>>Gary
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