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My comments on CDL on section 2.5.3 and beyond

From: Charlton Barreto <charlton_b@mac.com>
Date: Tue, 7 Dec 2004 12:17:20 -0800
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To: public-ws-chor@w3.org

 From the Dec 03 draft:

Section 2.5.3, lines 32-35:
"The perform activity enables a Choreography to specify than another 
Choreography is performed at this point in its definition, as an 
enclosed Choreography."
Can we change this to, "The perform activity enables a Choreography to 
specify that another, enclosed Choreography, is performed at this point 
in its definition."

Section 7
We should move Section 7, "Conformance", to Section 8 (sliding all 
subsequent sections one section #), and add the following for Section 
7:
"7 Relationship with Addressing

The WS-Addressing specification [28] provides transport-neutral 
mechanisms to address Web services and messages, specifically, XML [XML 
1.0, XML Namespaces] elements to identify Web service endpoints and to 
secure end-to-end endpoint identification in messages. WS-Addressing 
enables messaging systems to support message transmission through 
networks that include processing nodes such as endpoint managers, 
firewalls, and gateways in a transport-neutral manner.

WS-Addressing can be used to convey the reference and correlation 
information for normalizing expanded channelVariable information into 
an uniform format that can be processed independently of transport or 
application."

Section 10
In the new Section 10, "References" (formerly Section 9), we should add:
"[28] Web Services Addressing (WS-Addressing) - W3C Member Submission 
10 August 2004"

More editorial comments are forthcoming....

-Charlton.
Received on Tuesday, 7 December 2004 20:17:27 UTC

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