Re: Updating our Draft Rports to Final Reports

Hi Futomi,

I have noticed a few "typo" issues:

[Basic media profile document][Storage profile document]
(contain the same typo errors)

1 Introduction
...Basically, web-based signage is based on the core profile (this
document)...

"(this document)" should be deleted.

2 Scope and terminology
(Second paragraph)
...Basically, web-based signage is based on the core profile (this
document)...

"(this document)" should be deleted.

Cheers,
Roy



On 2015/11/20 18:13, 羽田野太巳 wrote:
> 2015-11-20 16:35 GMT+09:00 Sangwhan Moon <sangwhan@iki.fi 
> <mailto:sangwhan@iki.fi>>:
> 
> 
> 
>     On Nov 20, 2015, at 4:12 PM, 羽田野太巳
>     <futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp
>     <mailto:futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp>> wrote:
> 
>>     Hi all,
>>
>>     As we decided at the group meeting at TPAC 2015, we accepted the
>>     request of liaison from ITU-T SG-16.
>>
>>     As you know, we have drafted 4 documents:
>>
>>     (1) Web-based Signage Use cases and Requirements
>>     https://www.w3.org/community/websignage/wiki/Web-based_Signage_Use_cases_and_Requirements
>>
>>     (2) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player -
>>     Core Profile
>>     https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Core_Profile/master/index.html
>>
>>     (3) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player -
>>     Basic Media Profile
>>     https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Basic_Media_Profile/master/index.html
>>
>>     (4) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player -
>>     Storage Profile
>>     https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Storage_Profile/master/index.html
>>
>>     We have to publish these drafts as final drafts so that ITU-T
>>     SG-16 refers our document.
>>
>>     (1) is on the wiki. the draft has to be a HTML document in order
>>     to publish as a final report. So, I prepared a HTML version of the
>>     draft.
>>     https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Use_cases_and_Requirements/master/index.html
>>
>>     Now, all drafts are HTML documents.
>>
>>     If you all don't deny to publish these drafts as final reports,
>>     I'd like to publish them as final reports as soon as possible.
>>     I'd like to hear your opinions. I'll wait about for a month.
> 
>     I don't have any objections wrt publishing, but I think these
>     documents need to be throughly proofread before we publish them. The
>     wording and grammar could use some polish before we push it out.
> 
> 
> Thank you for your comment.
> You are right.
> I'll check them again too.
> 
>     I'm swamped with other stuff so I can't volunteer at the moment, but
>     maybe in two weeks I can go through the text and brush it up a bit.
>     (Speaking of which, I need to do that for the charter as well...)
> 
> 
> Thank you  for your corporation.
> 
>     (The UcR document says "rport" instead of "report", for example.)
> 
> 
> Oh...
> I'll correct it as soon as possible.
> 
> Cheers,
> Futomi
> 
>     Sangwhan
> 
> 

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