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Re: Blog post doc sprint Amsterdam

From: Paul Verbeek <verbeek.p@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 5 Sep 2014 07:45:58 +0200
Message-ID: <CAHN5aqQeFMnvr+StRC0=1kU1mRwwvn_9fum2qHAYDbHa6PbQ7Q@mail.gmail.com>
To: Amelia Bellamy-Royds <amelia.bellamy.royds@gmail.com>
Cc: Eliot Graff <Eliot.Graff@microsoft.com>, Julee Burdekin <julee@adobe.com>, "public-webplatform@w3.org" <public-webplatform@w3.org>
Hi,

Thanks for the suggestions and edits, I updated the post.
If I can get an OK, I'll publish it.

Cheers,
Paul


On 4 September 2014 20:38, Amelia Bellamy-Royds <
amelia.bellamy.royds@gmail.com> wrote:

> One suggestion: the date should be given in the first two paragraphs,
> without having to click through one of the links.
>
> As you mention later, people might be in the area for reasons other than
> the Fronteers conference, and these people won't automatically know what
> date is the day before the conference starts!
>
> Other than that, I think Eliot's edits create a clear and informative
> description without losing Paul's friendly tone.
>
> Amelia
>
>
> On 4 September 2014 10:44, Eliot Graff <Eliot.Graff@microsoft.com> wrote:
>
>>  Hi Paul.
>>
>>
>>
>> This looks great. And it’s very exciting (Oh, how I wish I could be
>> there….)
>>
>>
>>
>> I did a not-so-light edit. J
>>
>>
>>
>> It’s attached as a Word doc (let me know if you need another format).
>> Please take or reject suggestions as you see fit.
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>> Also, I am hoping to get final confirmation today or tomorrow about which
>> Microsoft rep will attend to help.
>>
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>> Eliot
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>> *From:* Julee Burdekin [mailto:julee@adobe.com]
>> *Sent:* Thursday, September 4, 2014 9:35 AM
>> *To:* Paul Verbeek; public-webplatform@w3.org
>> *Subject:* Re: Blog post doc sprint Amsterdam
>>
>>
>>
>> So cool, Paul. I did a light copyedit. J
>>
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>> -------------------
>>
>> Julee Burdekin
>>
>> Content Strategist
>>
>> Adobe Web Platform
>>
>> @adobejulee
>>
>> julee@adobe.com
>>
>>
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>> *From: *Paul Verbeek <verbeek.p@gmail.com>
>> *Date: *Thursday, September 4, 2014 at 5:32 AM
>> *To: *WebPlatform Public List <public-webplatform@w3.org>
>> *Subject: *Blog post doc sprint Amsterdam
>> *Resent-From: *WebPlatform Public List <public-webplatform@w3.org>
>> *Resent-Date: *Thursday, September 4, 2014 at 5:33 AM
>>
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>>
>> Hi all!
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>>
>> I wrote up a blog post for the doc sprint next month:
>> http://blog.webplatform.org/?p=1045&preview=true
>>
>>
>>
>> Could you take a quick look and give me improvements.
>>
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>>
>> Thanks!
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>> Cheers,
>>
>> Paul
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