- From: Paul Verbeek <verbeek.p@gmail.com>
- Date: Fri, 5 Sep 2014 07:45:58 +0200
- To: Amelia Bellamy-Royds <amelia.bellamy.royds@gmail.com>
- Cc: Eliot Graff <Eliot.Graff@microsoft.com>, Julee Burdekin <julee@adobe.com>, "public-webplatform@w3.org" <public-webplatform@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <CAHN5aqQeFMnvr+StRC0=1kU1mRwwvn_9fum2qHAYDbHa6PbQ7Q@mail.gmail.com>
Hi, Thanks for the suggestions and edits, I updated the post. If I can get an OK, I'll publish it. Cheers, Paul On 4 September 2014 20:38, Amelia Bellamy-Royds < amelia.bellamy.royds@gmail.com> wrote: > One suggestion: the date should be given in the first two paragraphs, > without having to click through one of the links. > > As you mention later, people might be in the area for reasons other than > the Fronteers conference, and these people won't automatically know what > date is the day before the conference starts! > > Other than that, I think Eliot's edits create a clear and informative > description without losing Paul's friendly tone. > > Amelia > > > On 4 September 2014 10:44, Eliot Graff <Eliot.Graff@microsoft.com> wrote: > >> Hi Paul. >> >> >> >> This looks great. And it’s very exciting (Oh, how I wish I could be >> there….) >> >> >> >> I did a not-so-light edit. J >> >> >> >> It’s attached as a Word doc (let me know if you need another format). >> Please take or reject suggestions as you see fit. >> >> >> >> Also, I am hoping to get final confirmation today or tomorrow about which >> Microsoft rep will attend to help. >> >> >> >> Eliot >> >> >> >> *From:* Julee Burdekin [mailto:julee@adobe.com] >> *Sent:* Thursday, September 4, 2014 9:35 AM >> *To:* Paul Verbeek; public-webplatform@w3.org >> *Subject:* Re: Blog post doc sprint Amsterdam >> >> >> >> So cool, Paul. I did a light copyedit. J >> >> >> >> ------------------- >> >> Julee Burdekin >> >> Content Strategist >> >> Adobe Web Platform >> >> @adobejulee >> >> julee@adobe.com >> >> >> >> *From: *Paul Verbeek <verbeek.p@gmail.com> >> *Date: *Thursday, September 4, 2014 at 5:32 AM >> *To: *WebPlatform Public List <public-webplatform@w3.org> >> *Subject: *Blog post doc sprint Amsterdam >> *Resent-From: *WebPlatform Public List <public-webplatform@w3.org> >> *Resent-Date: *Thursday, September 4, 2014 at 5:33 AM >> >> >> >> Hi all! >> >> >> >> I wrote up a blog post for the doc sprint next month: >> http://blog.webplatform.org/?p=1045&preview=true >> >> >> >> Could you take a quick look and give me improvements. >> >> >> >> Thanks! >> >> >> >> Cheers, >> >> Paul >> >> >> >> >> > >
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