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Re: Please review WPDS blog post

From: Doug Schepers <schepers@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 03 Sep 2013 04:34:42 -0400
Message-ID: <52259F22.3010000@w3.org>
To: Andre Jay Meissner <ameissne@adobe.com>
CC: "public-webplatform@w3.org" <public-webplatform@w3.org>, Renoir Boulanger <renoir@w3.org>
Hi, Jay–

Looks good! I say publish it.

I did think of one more optional suggestion... you could link to the 
individual articles, so people can check them out immediately without 
searching:
* 11 HTML element pages written: dl, dd, dt, s, del, ins, center, meter, 
button, a, script
* 4 HTML attribute pages written: id, required, type, target
* 2 API pages written: VibrationAPI, Canvas Tutorial

(And shouldn't VibrationAPI be Vibration API?)

Regards-
-Doug

On 9/3/13 4:18 AM, Andre Jay Meissner wrote:
> Thanks all for your reviews, specifically @Doug for setting the missing
> flag and pointing out the crazy 3rd person stuff that has been introduced
> before I set myself as the author... much better without that mention
> anyway! :)= Edits are made based on the tweaks below, please give it a
> final look so I can publish it today.
>
> Oh wait, weird!
> http://blog.webplatform.org/?p=626&preview=1&_ppp=a4a382e9ec still shows
> the outdated version, whereas using the WordPress "Preview" functionality
> previews the edits I have made. Hm. I tried dis/enabling it hoping it
> generates a new public preview/URL, to no avail. @Renoir?
>
> (People with WP accounts, please review and approve! #ahrgh)
>
> Thanks, *Jay
>
>
>
>
> -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
> Von: Doug Schepers <schepers@w3.org>
> Organisation: W3C
> Datum: KW 36 | Dienstag, 3. September 2013 03:00
> An: Andre Jay Meissner <ameissne@adobe.com>
> Cc: "public-webplatform@w3.org" <public-webplatform@w3.org>
> Betreff: Re: Please review WPDS blog post
>
>> Hi, Jay, Chris­
>>
>> On 9/2/13 12:04 PM, Andre Jay Meissner wrote:
>>> Chris and me wrote a resume for the blog. Please review, as always it
>>> needs two approvers please:
>>> http://blog.webplatform.org/?p=626&preview=true
>>
>> This post (and Doc Sprint) looks great! Really good color.
>>
>> I suggest a couple of minor tweaks:
>>
>> * Does Andre Jay Meissner from Adobe always refer to himself in the 3rd
>> person? :P I'm not sure how to fix this, other than to suggest "I (
>> Andre Jay Meissner from Adobe) kicked off proceedings"... which also
>> sounds weird. Oh, well.
>>
>> * "kicked off proceedings" -> "kicked off the proceedings"
>>
>> * stuck in: in American English (such as it is), this has a negative
>> connotation, like they were forced to do this against their will (like,
>> "stuck in traffic" or "stuck in school on a Spring day"). I think in
>> British English, it means "to start doing something enthusiastically".
>> Maybe "and jumped head-first in to a variety of tasks" or something?
>>
>> Thanks again for the Doc Sprint and the report!
>>
>> Regards-
>> -Doug
>
>


-- 
  Schepers
W3C Developer Relations Lead
Project Coordinator for SVG, WebApps, Touch Events, and Audio
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