Re: [w3c/payment-request] Editorial fixes (#673)

ianbjacobs commented on this pull request.

Hi @marcoscaceres,

I think this is ok given that other parts of the spec address these points. However, note the text earlier in the document:

 " For example, the user agent may require the call to be triggered by user activation, or may limit the rate at which a page can call show(), as described in the privacy considerations section."

The "as described..." needs to be deleted.

(I looked for other references to the section but only see the one.)

Ian



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