I have sent comments to Janet suggesting changes, but they are mostly
editorial. In short: the draft is likely to change.
_ Ian
On Mon, 2007-01-08 at 10:57 -0700, Lofton Henderson wrote:
> Thanks for drafting this.
>
> I don't see anything "egregious" -- looks fine to me.
>
> WebCGM WG: please read the draft release and reply ("ReplyAll") if there
> are any details that concern you.
>
> (I will be able to give you the URI of the OASIS document soon ... I'm just
> awaiting confirmation.)
>
> Regards,
> -Lofton.
>
> At 03:07 PM 1/4/2007 -0800, Janet Daly wrote:
>
> >Hello, All.
> >
> >Carol and I have a draft of the press release for the WebCGM
> >announcement [1] scheduled for 30 January 2007. We are getting quotes
> >from our respective CEOs in the upcoming week, and to get the
> >remaining URIs and missing items (such as the OASIS logo). After that
> >point, we should be ready to send the document to translators. This
> >draft can also serve as a basis for your marketing departments to put
> >together testimonials.
> >
> >Please let me know if you see any egregious errors or if there are
> >technical features you think would be good to promote, keeping in
> >mind that our audience is less technically versed than the actual
> >users of WebCGM.
> >
> >[1] http://www.w3.org/2007/01/webcgm-pressrelease.html.en
> >
> >Best regards,
> >
> >Janet
> >
> >-----------------------------------------------------------
> >
> >World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
> >
> >Janet Daly, Global Communications Officer
> >o: +1.617.253.5884
> >m: +1.206.228.1097
> >janet@w3.org
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
>
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