Received: from frink.w3.org [128.30.52.16] by mail.itedo.com with ESMTP (SMTPD-8.22) id AB6B0310; Fri, 21 Jul 2006 02:16:27 -0700 Received: from lists by frink.w3.org with local (Exim 4.50) id 1G3r7R-0007dI-Fe for public-webcgm-dist@listhub.w3.org; Fri, 21 Jul 2006 09:16:25 +0000 Received: from maggie.w3.org ([193.51.208.68]) by frink.w3.org with esmtp (Exim 4.50) id 1G3r7P-0007bh-I3 for public-webcgm@listhub.w3.org; Fri, 21 Jul 2006 09:16:23 +0000 Received: from homer.w3.org ([128.30.52.30]) by maggie.w3.org with esmtp (Exim 4.50) id 1G3r7I-0001sc-Ct for public-webcgm@w3.org; Fri, 21 Jul 2006 09:16:18 +0000 Received: from acer3010.ins.cwi.nl (homer.w3.org [128.30.52.30]) by homer.w3.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 362A04F1D8 for ; Fri, 21 Jul 2006 05:16:13 -0400 (EDT) Date: Fri, 21 Jul 2006 11:15:53 +0200 To: public-webcgm@w3.org From: "Steven Pemberton" Organization: CWI/W3C Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; delsp=yes; charset=iso-8859-15 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Message-ID: User-Agent: Opera Mail/9.00 (Win32) Received-SPF: none (maggie.w3.org: domain of steven.pemberton@cwi.nl does not designate permitted sender hosts) X-W3C-Hub-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.6 X-W3C-Scan-Sig: maggie.w3.org 1G3r7I-0001sc-Ct 06158c2ec53366ac68a078605b826a18 X-Original-To: public-webcgm@w3.org Subject: [LC Review] X-Archived-At: http://www.w3.org/mid/op.tc070rolsmjzpq@acer3010.ins.cwi.nl Resent-From: public-webcgm@w3.org X-Mailing-List: archive/latest/9 X-Loop: public-webcgm@w3.org Sender: public-webcgm-request@w3.org Resent-Sender: public-webcgm-request@w3.org Precedence: list List-Id: List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: Resent-Message-Id: Resent-Date: Fri, 21 Jul 2006 09:16:25 +0000 X-RCPT-TO: Status: U X-UIDL: 433560421 X-IMail-ThreadID: 9b6b042b00000c82 One thing that struck me was how far you have to read before you find out what WebCGM actually is. I think that at very least the abstract should say what it is. For the uninitiated it is not until section 1.4 that you start getting an inkling that it is something to do with 2D graphics. Steven Pemberton