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[widgets] P&C Last Call comments, 1

From: Marcin Hanclik <Marcin.Hanclik@access-company.com>
Date: Mon, 1 Jun 2009 00:44:17 +0200
To: "public-webapps@w3.org" <public-webapps@w3.org>
Message-ID: <FAA1D89C5BAF1142A74AF116630A9F2C0A26D782DC@OBEEX01.obe.access-company.com>
EDITORIALs and Global stuff

Unify "inform an" vs. "inform the" throughout the full document.
Unify i.e. (i.e.,) and e.g. (e.g.,) to follow fully either American- or British-English.
Should not the RFC2119 terms in authoring guidelines be also in uppercase?
What is the normative status of the authoring guidelines?
Term API is not defined.
Maybe <...> notation could be used for all elements, not only for <its:span>?
Zip or zip could be used consistently within the document.

1.4
Could this section (and the similar content from the family specs) be moved to a separate document?

3.2
its:span
should be
<its:span>

4.
assists them making
should be
assists them in making

5.
.Zip file
may be
.zip file

5.2
minimum version supported version
should be
minimum supported version

the the CC MUST
should be
the CC MUST

5.3
it is recommended  that a user agent internally treat all zip-relative
should be
it is recommended  that a user agent internally treats all zip-relative


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