Re: [w3c/manifest] chore: remove some cross referenced terms (#816)

marcoscaceres approved this pull request.

Few little suggestions to apply - otherwise looks great! 

> @@ -1951,8 +1950,7 @@ <h3>
           The <dfn>orientation</dfn> member is a <a>string</a> that serves as
           the <a>default orientation</a> for all <a>top-level browsing
           contexts</a> of the web application. The possible values are those of
-          the <a>OrientationLockType</a> enum defined in
-          [[SCREEN-ORIENTATION]].
+          the {{orientationlocktype}} enum defined in [[SCREEN-ORIENTATION]].

What you have here is correct, but it's wrong in the xref database :) I'll get that fixed as it should be `OrientationLockType`. 

> @@ -2836,12 +2831,10 @@ <h3>
           {{HTMLLinkElement/sizes}} attribute and let <a>list</a>
           <var>keywords</var> be the result.
           </li>
-          <li>
-            <a>For each</a> <var>keyword</var> of <var>keywords</var>:
+          <li>[=list/For each=]&gt; <var>keyword</var> of <var>keywords</var>:

```suggestion
          <li>[=list/For each=] <var>keyword</var> of <var>keywords</var>:
```

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