Re: [w3c/manifest] Editorial: Explain reasoning for single IARC code (#715)

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         </h3>
         <p>
           The <dfn>iarc_rating_id</dfn> member is a <a>string</a> that
-          represents an ID value of the IARC rating of the web application. It
-          is intended to be used to determine which ages the web application is
-          appropriate for.
+          represents the <a href="https://www.globalratings.com/">International
+          Age Rating Coalition (IARC)</a> certification code of the web
+          application. It is intended to be used to determine which ages the
+          web application is appropriate for.
+        </p>
+        <p class="note">
+          Manifest authors can obtain IARC certificates via participating
+          storefronts over which the web application should be distributed.

store fronts - two words? I think that is more common

> @@ -2303,9 +2303,18 @@ <h3>
         </h3>
         <p>
           The <dfn>iarc_rating_id</dfn> member is a <a>string</a> that
-          represents an ID value of the IARC rating of the web application. It
-          is intended to be used to determine which ages the web application is
-          appropriate for.
+          represents the <a href="https://www.globalratings.com/">International
+          Age Rating Coalition (IARC)</a> certification code of the web
+          application. It is intended to be used to determine which ages the
+          web application is appropriate for.
+        </p>
+        <p class="note">
+          Manifest authors can obtain IARC certificates via participating

It might not be the actual manifest authors would who would do this. Maybe Web authors...   or just "An IARC certif...

> @@ -2303,9 +2303,18 @@ <h3>
         </h3>
         <p>
           The <dfn>iarc_rating_id</dfn> member is a <a>string</a> that
-          represents an ID value of the IARC rating of the web application. It
-          is intended to be used to determine which ages the web application is
-          appropriate for.
+          represents the <a href="https://www.globalratings.com/">International
+          Age Rating Coalition (IARC)</a> certification code of the web
+          application. It is intended to be used to determine which ages the
+          web application is appropriate for.
+        </p>
+        <p class="note">
+          Manifest authors can obtain IARC certificates via participating
+          storefronts over which the web application should be distributed.
+          The <dfn>iarc_rating_id</dfn> member only takes a single
+          certification code. The same code can be shared across storefronts,

across *participating* store fronts, as long as the distributed product remains the same (ie. don't serve totally different code paths depending on UA sniffing and the like)

> @@ -2303,9 +2303,18 @@ <h3>
         </h3>
         <p>
           The <dfn>iarc_rating_id</dfn> member is a <a>string</a> that
-          represents an ID value of the IARC rating of the web application. It
-          is intended to be used to determine which ages the web application is
-          appropriate for.
+          represents the <a href="https://www.globalratings.com/">International
+          Age Rating Coalition (IARC)</a> certification code of the web
+          application. It is intended to be used to determine which ages the
+          web application is appropriate for.
+        </p>
+        <p class="note">
+          Manifest authors can obtain IARC certificates via participating
+          storefronts over which the web application should be distributed.

Maybe ... The IARC certificates can be obtained via participating store fronts, intended to be used for distributing the web app.

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